Keli Gwyn, Novelist

Moving Day

2011-01-01T20:41:00.000-08:00

I'm moving my blog to WordPress.

Why make the move?

I've had my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey, at WordPress for over two years. Having both blogs hosted by the same provider will make things easier for me. Since I'm not as young as I once was, the less I have to remember, the better. After 50-something years, my RAM is getting full.

It's my hope that you, my faithful visitors, will follow me to the new site:
http://keligwyn.wordpress.com.

I look forward to seeing you there.

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The High Point of 2010: Great People!

2010-12-30T15:02:00.001-08:00

Are you a great person? In my book, yes!

My year has been enriched by family and friends, but you, my cyber pals and writing buddies, are special to me. You share my passion for writing and "get" me in a way others can't.

As I reflect on the year that is fast drawing to a close, I'm reminded of wonderful times shared with wonderful people.
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RWA® Nationals in Orlando ~ July
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Me with my longtime critique partner and dear friend Anne Barton. I hadn't seen her since we met in person the first time in San Francisco two years before. I about bowled her over when she entered the hotel lobby in Orlando.
. I met many wonderful writers I've gotten to know online, including several of my Seeker friends. Pictured from left to right are Sandra Leesmith, Myra Johnson, Janet Dean, Me, Ruth Logan Herne, and Missy Tippens.

ACFW Conference in Indianapolis ~ September

Here I am with my new critique partner and special friend Jody Hedlund. What a thrill it's been getting to know her better and to share in her journey as her debut novel, The Preacher's Bride, was released.
. Rachelle Gardner is my agent extraordinaire. Meeting her for the first time was a thrill. She's even more beautiful in person than she is in pictures. And she's lots of fun, too.
. I got to hang out with some great gals during the conference, both blogging buddies and newfound friends. Being in the company of these wonderful women was a delight. Pictured from left to right are Wendy Payne Miller, Heather Sunseri, Catherine West, Anne Lang Bundy, Katie Ganshert, Sarah Forgrave, Jeannie Mood Campbell, Cindy R. Wilson, and Me.
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As I look forward to 2011, I anticipate sharing in many celebrations. I know many talented people and expect to hear plenty of good news, so I keep my happy dancing shoes handy.
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Happy New Year!

Merry Christmas!

2010-12-24T12:21:00.000-08:00

Our college daughter is on her way home for Christmas, and I'm sooo eager to see her.

Gwynly and I remarked yesterday how it hasn't really felt like Christmas to us yet. Even though our tree was cut, up, and decorated the day after Thanksgiving with the the wrapped presents beneath it just the way The Fashion Queen likes, without her here, things didn't feel complete.

But they will when she arrives.

Tonight, we'll attend our Christmas Eve candlelight service and reflect on the real meaning of Christmas. We'll open our stockings when we get home from church. Tomorrow, we'll watch the others' reactions to our carefully selected gifts. And we'll enjoy being together.

I wish you and your family a blessed celebration of Christmas.

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I've seen several great Christmas videos this season. Since Gwynly and I have been Mac people for two decades, this one of the North Point Community Church iBand's rendition of three Christmas songs was among my favorites.

Happy Anniversary x 2

2010-12-19T12:15:00.000-08:00

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A Wedding Anniversary

My hubby and I got married December 19, 1987. We're celebrating 23 years of marriage.

I was a Christmas bride, complete with attendants in red velvet and poinsettias as our flowers. Gwynly's special request for the ceremony was to have me stand on a footstool for the kiss, his way of having a little fun since I'm a foot shorter than he is.
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I've been asked why we chose to marry at Christmas. The answer is impatience. :-)

Gwynly is a teacher. He proposed in the middle of the summer. Since I was already 28 and he has nearly ten years on me, I didn't want to wait until the following summer to get married, so we settled on the next possible date: the first Saturday of his Christmas break.

I'm also asked if I liked being married in December. Yes! We like that our marriage began at the same time our Savior's birth is celebrated.
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A Writing Journey Anniversary

Last year, Gwynly took me out to dinner to celebrate our anniversary. When we arrived home, I checked my email. I saw the name Rachelle Gardener in my in-box, and my heart rate went from impulse to warp speed in a nanosecond.

The day before, I'd sent Rachelle the full manuscript she'd requested after judging my entry in the Launching a Star contest. Part of me wanted to believe the email was good news. The other part of me thought it might be nothing more than a message letting me know she'd received my submission.

With trembling fingers, I opened the email. Eight memorable words, "I'd like to discuss the possibility of representation . . ." were all I read before I leaped from my chair screaming "Oh, my Gosh!" at the top of my lungs. Our two skitty kitties ran for cover while my hubby and daughter dashed into my office to find out what was wrong. I just pointed at the computer screen and continued my wild shrieking while I literally bounced off the walls and clung to doorjambs and pieces of furniture to keep from collapsing.

Talk about euphoria. That evening exactly a year ago I experienced it full force.

Four days later, on the eve of Christmas Eve, Rachelle called and made the official offer of representation, which, having done my homework, I was eager to accept. Talk about an incredible Christmas present!
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Rachelle Gardner and me at the 2010 ACFW Conference

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A year has come and gone. I spent months rewriting my story. Rachelle sent it out on submission on October 17 at 7:23 a.m. (Yes, that was a Sunday, and yes, that was before she'd had breakfast. She's beyond amazing!)

The publishing world has pretty much shut down for the rest of the year, so I'm waiting to see what the new year has in store. One thing I know is that I'll be starting a new story, and that's always fun.

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I wanna know . . .
What is one of the most memorable Christmas gifts you've ever received?
Are you, like me, waiting for news from publishing professionals?
What will you be working on when 2011 begins?

I wish you a very merry Christmas.

The Waiting Game

2010-12-02T06:07:00.000-08:00

22 shopping days until Christmas!

A store in town posts the news on their sign each day so no one can miss it.

My daughter knows exactly how many days remain. She's been counting them down since October 1st.

The Fashion Queen is Miss Christmas. She's so enamored with the season that Thanksgiving, in her book, is known as The Day Before We Get The Tree. It's also the Day After All The Christmas Shopping is Done. She's not a happy camper unless the presents are wrapped and ready to put under the tree once it's up and decorated.

The tree's up. The gifts are in place. She's smiling. Now comes the wait.

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Writers know all about waiting. After all, we're all aware that things in the publishing world move with the speed of a sleepy snail, right?

We wait for:

Inspiration to strike
The day we type The End
Feedback from critique partners
Contest results to be announced

And then there are the BIGGIES:

An agent to offer representation
A publishing house to offer a contract

And the waiting doesn't stop there. Newly contracted writers wait for:

The title to be firmed up
The cover to be designed
The book to be released

The waiting continues as an author awaits:

The first reviews
The edits on book two to be approved
The ideas on book three to come together

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So, what do we do while we wait?

Do a number on our nails as we nibble them
Test our spouses' patience as we bemoan the state of things
Inundate our writing buddies with emails ranting about what isn't happening

Nope. There's a better way. We act like the professionals we are and take action. While we might feel like there's little we can do to move our careers along, there are a number of steps we can take.

Concentrate on our writing

Read books on craft
Focus on writing the best story possible
Rewrite, revise, and polish that story before submitting it

Build an online presence

Set up a website
Start/improve our blogs
Get Facebook and Twitter accounts

Educate ourselves about the publishing world

Visit agent and editor blogs
Visit publishing house websites
Learn how to write a great query letter

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Waiting isn't easy. But if we use our waiting time well, we'll be better prepared for the day when our Dream Agent offers representation or an editor reads our story and says, "I want to contract this."

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I wanna know . . .

What are you waiting for right now?
How do you handle the waiting time?
What lessons have you learned while waiting?

Happy Dancing for My Critique Partner

2010-08-30T09:02:00.000-07:00

I've been blessed with two critique partners who are wonderful writers as well as treasured friends. I love reading their work, and I love when good things happen to them.

One of my critique partners is Jody Hedlund, whose debut novel, The Preacher's Bride, is due to be released by Bethany House on October 1st. Since Jody and I became CPs this year, I haven't read TPB yet, although I've had my preview copy on order from Amazon for months.

One of the big events a debut romance novelist awaits is her first review from RT Book Reviews. I've been eagerly awaiting Jody's. Since I subscribe to the magazine (and highly recommend that every romance writer do the same), I'm able to view the reviews online weeks before they appear in print.

This morning, I visited the RT website and squealed. Not only was the review up, but Jody's book, The Preacher's Bride, received the highest RT Book Reviews rating: 4-1/2 stars!!! I'm beyond thrilled for Jody. What a way to launch her career as a published novelist.

I contacted RT Book Reviews to request permission to share Jody's excellent review, and editor Carol Stacy generously granted it.

So, here it is:
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THE PREACHER’S BRIDE
by Jody Hedlund

Genre: Historical Romance, Inspirational

RT Rating

In this remarkable debut based on the life of Pilgrim’s Progress author John Bunyan, Hedlund shows a great talent for immediately transporting readers into her story. The pages turn faster with each chapter and the characters seem like old friends from the beginning.

When his wife perishes after the birth of their son, John is too busy grieving to want another woman to care for his home and children. However, Elizabeth has other plans after being asked to keep house for the preacher and falling in love with the newborn baby and his siblings. John has made some powerful enemies as his brave sermons upset Royalists in 1650 England, and Elizabeth is soon dragged into peril. Now that she has grown to love John, she may be the only one who can save him. (BETHANY HOUSE, Oct., 384 pp., $14.99)

Reviewed By: Terri Dukes

Publisher: BETHANY HOUSE

Published: October 2010

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Currently, only subscribers can see the review online. As of October 1st, anyone will be able to view Jody's review at: http://www.rtbookreviews.com/book-review/preacher%E2%80%99s-bride

The October issue of RT Book Reviews is on newsstands and in the mail to subscribers, so you can view the print version of the review there as soon as you get a copy.

RWA® Nationals 2010

2010-08-12T23:29:00.000-07:00

Nationals has come and gone, but I'm still savoring the memories and will do so for months to come. I had a blast!

I applaud the Romance Writers of America® staff and board for the incredible job they did. When the devastating flooding in Nashville this past winter forced a change of venue, RWA found a new location in just three days. The Dolphin and Swan Hotels in Orlando made us feel welcome, and I'm grateful to their staff as well.

When I attended Nationals for the first time in 2008, I was overwhelmed. This was my second RWA conference, and I knew what to expect. I arrived ready to embrace the experience, and I did.

My biggest thrill was spending time with my awesome critique partner and treasured friend, Anne Barton. I hadn't seen her in person since the conference in San Francisco, so when she entered the hotel she got a huge hug.
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Here I am with Anne on my right.

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I'll be blogging about some of my other conference highlights, but today I want to focus on my Golden Heart experience. I was a finalist in the inspirational category. Since I'd been a finalist in 2008 as well, I knew RWA treats the finalists like royalty. This year was no exception.

One of my goals for the conference was to locate Terri Reed, the board member who called me on March 25th in both 2008 and this year. I checked into my room and hurried back down to get the lay of the land. I began reading name tags right away. One of the first I saw was Terri's! I squealed. Thankfully, since she makes GH phone calls, she's used to that. I delivered the hug I'd earmarked just for her.

The Awards Ceremony takes place at the close of the conference. Since this was RWA's 30th anniversary, we were served dinner. The huge room held 2,000+ conferees and their guests. Anne was mine. We had great seats in the VIP section at the second row with an excellent view of the podium. We were so close we could see without having to watch one of four jumbotron screens.

Our table was next to the one reserved for Nora Roberts and her guests. Yup! Anne and I were four people away from the most recognized name in romance. Nope! I didn't shove a camera in her face, so I don't have a picture to share.

Once dinner was over, we had a few minutes to mingle. And then, promptly at eight, the ceremony began. RWA does a superb job. The evening feels like the Oscars. When a winner's name is called, a spotlight follows her to the stage.

I had fun listening to the acceptance speeches. Some made me laugh. Others made me cry. All of them moved me just as the win moved the novelist who earned the award. Husbands, critique partners, agents, and editors were thanked. One winner thanked Diet Coke!

The inspirational winner is CJ Eernisse Chase. She was stunned to hear her name called, but I wasn't. She's a talented novelist who has finaled in the Golden Heart six times. I believe it was her turn, and I'm thrilled for her. I hope her win leads to representation and a sale.

One of the best parts about the Awards Ceremony is that we get to dress up. What fun it is to feel like a princess for the evening. My daughter, The Fashion Queen, found me a "little black dress." She's got great taste. The dress fit like it was made for me and traveled well, making it from California to Florida without a single wrinkle.
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I'll close by sharing some more pictures with you.

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.Here is Anne looking, oh, so elegant in her Awards Ceremony finery.

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Here I am in my new dress.
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Here we are posing for pictures before the ceremony began. I'm with two classy ladies: Anne and my fellow 2010 finalist Lisa Connelly, who is Anne's cousin.
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Here I am with my inspirational category mates: CJ Eernisse Chase and Kristin Wallace.

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Here's CJ wearing her new bit of bling, her Golden Heart necklace. I'm sooo happy for her.

Critique Partners

2010-06-18T05:30:00.000-07:00

You wrote a book. Now what?

If you’re like me, you wrote another and another and...

I wrote five books in two years, all without the aid of writing buddies or critique partners. I read some books on craft and received helpful feedback from contest judges, but my writing pretty much stayed at the same level until March 2008.

That month I found out I’d finaled in the Romance Writers of America® Golden Heart® contest, and a whole new world opened up to me. I got to know my fellow finalists as well as other talented writers and authors.

I've met many awesome writers, two of whom are now my critique partners.

I’ve asked some of my guests on my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey, what advice they would give new writers. One answer that comes up regularly is to get into a critique group. I’ve seen agents and editors give the same advice on their sites. When my agent, Rachelle Gardner, and I first talked, she asked if I had critique partners.

Contest judges have really helped me. I thank each of the generous writers who’ve given of their time and experience, sharing their suggestions and steering me to resources. But I needed more.

Enter my CPs.

Benefits of Having a Critique Partner

•Two-way communication

Contest feedback can be helpful, but if I don’t understand something a judge says, I have no way of finding out what was meant. Being able to ask my CPs for clarification is great.

•In-depth feedback

Having served as a contest judge numerous times, I learned we’re supposed to keep our feedback encouraging, our primary goal being to support and gently educate the entrants. In a CP relationship, however, we build trust and learn to share at a deeper level than a contest judge can. Plus, we can ask our CPs for help in specific areas.

•Unlimited feedback

Contest judges focus on major areas and choose which need the most attention. We can’t address everything we see. However, my CPs and I don’t have such limitations. Thus, I get much more feedback from a CP’s edit than I can expect from a contest judge.

•Learning from your critique partners’ strengths

I’m blessed with two amazing CPs. Each has a unique voice and different areas of expertise. Together they make an awesome team.

Anne Barton writes witty, entertaining Regency historicals with endearing characters. She serves as my micro reader, although I value her comments on big picture issues as well. We've been working together two years, and she's taught me a great deal. She provides my line and copy edits. And, wow, is she ever good at helping me strengthen my transitions and scene endings. Plus, she’s a math-teacher and has a great way of quantifying contest feedback, which I find very helpful.

Jody Hedlund is one of my agency mates who is also represented by Rachelle. Jody writes inspirational historicals set in the United States, as do I. Her stories are filled with action, emotion, and strong characterization. She serves as my macro reader. Because we write for the same market, she can assess my work in terms of the parameters of our genre. Whereas my strengths as an editor are of the line/copy edit variety, Jody is more of a big picture person.

I not only learn from my critique partners' feedback; I learn from reading their awesome works. (And I have fun, too.)

•Discovering your strengths

As I work with my CPs, I learn how my stories can be improved, but I also learn what I do well. I'm a detail-oriented reader and have been told by others that my technical skills are strong. I have a degree in Mass Communication with a print journalism focus, and I worked as an assistant editor for a small textbook publishing company at one point. I’m able to serve as an unofficial copy editor for my CPs.

I seem to have a knack for descriptions. I’m able to point out places my CPs have done a great job setting the scene as well as places they may want to add a bit more detail.

Finding out what you do well builds confidence. It also enables you to let potential CPs know in which areas you’ll be best able to help them.

Next week, I will take an in-depth look at critique partnerships on my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey, as a way to celebrate its first two years. During Critique Week, which will run June 20-26, I'll have daily posts that touch on different aspects of the critique partner relationship such as where to find critique partners, ways to provide feedback, and how to create a personal style sheet to use as an aid in critiquing.

And because this is the blog's birthday celebration, I'll be offering at least two different drawing prizes every day. I invite you to drop by and share in the fun.

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I wanna know . . .

Do you have critique partners?

What are your strengths as a critique partner?

What aspects of critique partnerships do you find most helpful?

What aspects of critique partnerships do you find most challenging?

Setting the Scene

2010-05-21T15:48:00.000-07:00

I'm a time traveler.

No. Not my characters. Me.

Are you having a hard time buying my story? I assure you, it's true.

I spent the morning in 1870 smack dab in the middle of July with the temperature hovering around the century mark and my hair sticking to my damp forehead.

How did I get there?

I used three devices to transport me to another time and place:
music, sensory stimuli, and images.

Music

I have a folder on iTunes that houses a number of classical pieces played by my characters, both of whom are musicians. I've listed to the selections several hundred times while working on my story, so hearing the compositions of yesteryear helps me shift gears. Since I'm a historical writer, I put it in reverse and go back in time.

Contemporary writers can use music to get them in the mood too. If your story is set at Christmas time, blast some carols. Do you have a scene taking place at the beach? Download some Beach Boys tunes.

Sensory Stimuli

I woke this morning to find puffy white cotton ball clouds scudding by and the thermometer outside registering 62º. The one inside was a whopping two degrees higher. This presented a challenge, since my characters were in the midst of a heat wave. I don't know about you,but when I'm chilly, I have a hard time remembering what it's like to be overheated.

What did I do?

I donned my bulkiest sweater, closed the door to my office, and cranked the space heater. I don't know how hot I got it, but I was, um, glowing. (Victorian women in the 1870s were far too proper to sweat. They left that to the horses.) The elevated temperature and my physical reaction made it far easier to feel what my characters were feeling.

Other senses can be used to set the scene. Are your characters at the circus? Pop open a jar of peanuts, and you have an instant scent-sation that can make you feel like you're there. Is your heroine in the middle of an earthquake or experiencing turbulence at 30,000 feet? Write while trying to balance on one of those jumbo exercise balls.

Images

One of the fastest ways for me to jump into a scene is to see it. To do this, I gather photographs that depict the people and places in my story and keep them nearby when I'm writing.

Since I write historicals, I went to a local antique store with a huge wicker basket chock-full of cartes de visite, those wallet-sized images of non-smiling people, which are mounted on cardboard. I set my stories in real towns in California's Mother Lode, so I purchased reference books about the tows, which are filled with photographs from by-gone days.

Whether you write historical or contemporary stories, it's easy to find images on the Internet that depict your setting--or one like it if yours is fictional--as well as pictures of people that look like your characters. You can print these out and keep them close at hand. Some of my writer friends mount their photos on poster board as collages.

Real life beckoned, and my trip back to 1870 came to an end. I closed iTunes, opened the door to my office to let out the heat, and blew a kiss to my characters, assuring them I'd see them again soon. When I do, I'll set the scene. I left my hero and heroine in a rose garden, so I'll pop outside, snip some of those on our bushes, and set them on my writing desk. I can smell them already.

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I wanna know . . .

How do you set your scenes?

Do you listen to music when you write?

Do you strive to emulate the sounds and scents?

Do you select pictures of your main characters and locations?

Falling in Love With My Characters . . . Again

2010-05-12T20:59:00.000-07:00

Falling in love is exciting.

Falling in love again is a different experience altogether, one that in my case came about after my husband and I joined together to face a tough situation thrust upon us by the actions of another. Working with Gwynly for two years as we dealt with considerable challenges in order to bring the stressful situation to a close showed me a depth of character I hadn't seen before, and my appreciation and respect for him deepened.

At the end of that l ordeal, I wanted to show Gwynly how much my love for him had grown. Inspired by Nicholas Sparks' book The Wedding, I planned a surprise vow renewal. Six months went into the planning, and the outcome was a memorable ceremony, one that showed Gwynly I would marry him all over again.
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Character Concerns

Earlier this year, I received Revision Notes from my agent, Rachelle Gardner. A few of her comments revolved around my two main characters.

My heroine began as a capable and determined woman, but as the story progressed she lost some of her spunk, so much so that at times she came off as wimpy and–I hate to admit this–even whiny. Not good!

My hero was a friendly man with an engaging manner that endeared him to everyone. He treated people well. Very well, in fact. All right, since I'm confessing, I'll tell you the truth. He was too nice. The man had a serious problem in that he had no problems–or at least not enough of them to count.
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Character Conversions

In the early stages of the rewrite, I redefined my main characters. Before I did that, however, I had to grieve the loss of the characters as I'd first created them. These two characters had lived in my fertile imagination for over three years, and, as you can imagine, I'd become quite attached to them. Bidding their former incarnations farewell took time.

Once I was ready to move on, these are seven steps I took as I reshaped my hero and heroine:

I revised their back stories and gave them more clearly defined issues.
I intensified their desire for what was most important to them.
I gave them stronger motivations for their choices and actions.
I determined how to strengthen my heroine.
I made my heroine's behavior more consistent.
I decided which weaknesses my hero would have.
I gave them both more emotional depth.

Character Chemistry

Once I had a handle on my main characters' new personae and my new plot, I began writing. Because I'd gone though the process of letting go of the earlier manifestations of my characters and had taken time to get to know the present ones, the story began to flow. As I spent time with my new and improved hero and heroine, I experienced a thrill similar to the one I felt when I witnessed a whole new aspect to my husband's personality emerge during the trial we faced. My hero and heroine are more likable, more realistic, and more fun. I've fallen in love with them all over again.

While making radical changes to characters who'd been so dear to me wasn't easy, I know it was the right thing to do if I want to have a marketable story. I loved the characters as I'd originally written them, but I'm even happier with them now.
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I Wanna Know . . .

Have you ever had to let go of a character you created? How did it feel?

Have you ever made significant changes to a character? What steps did you take?

Have you read a book and come across a character you felt wasn't as strong as she needed to be or one who had no real flaws? How did that make you feel?

Guest Blogging Today

2010-04-26T08:45:00.000-07:00

I'm a guest blogger at The Rockville 8 today where I'm sharing my thoughts on "The Realities of Revisions." Keely Thrall, a 2010 Golden Heart® finalist and one of the Rockville 8, honored me with the invitation. Since I've been busy with my revisions and not posting much here, I thought I'd share the link with you in case you're interested.

The Power of No-ing

2010-04-09T17:01:00.000-07:00

No!

Little word. Lotta impact.

However, it can be a tough word to say.

This week, I drove an hour and a half each way to a planning meeting. Our goal was to set up a writers group. I wanted to be there. I believe the group would add value to my life. But I ended up saying no to this opportunity.

Was it easy to email the leader and decline? Yes and no. I'm sad I won't be able to participate, but I'm relieved not to have another commitment.

How about you? Are there times you've taken on a role, joined another group, or volunteered for another task and ended up wishing you could back out?

Yup. I'd venture to say we all have.

So, how can we guard against taking on too much?

Realize that we have limitations ~ Many of you write, but you also work outside the home, have children still living with you, are caring for a parent . . . The list goes on. We can't do it all. There are only so many hours in the day. That's reality.
Realize the need to focus on our top priorities ~ As writers, creating our stories has to be a priority. However, if we overcommit, we can end up neglecting our writing as we attempt to get everything else done.
Realize there will always be opportunities to serve ~ On my loops, there are seemingly endless pleas for people willing to serve as contest judges, influencers, committee members, etc. But we don't have to respond. If we don't, often others will.
Realize we might not be the best person for the job ~ Even though we want to help, we may not be the one best suited to the task at that time. If we've got a full plate, adding another item could result in poor performance, ultimately letting others down. By stepping aside, we free up the position for someone who has the time to do a better job than we would.

I went through the items on this list as I drove home from the planning meeting, acknowledged the reality that I'm not the person to help establish this new group, and felt a sense of peace . . . until I thought about the need to send the email to the leader informing her of my decision.

What enabled me to combat the guilt and sense of obligation, type the message, and zap it to the leader?

I gave myself permission to Just Say No.

And it worked. I hit send. Not long after I received the nicest reply in which the leader said she understood my decision. No guilt. I shared an alternative to holding face-to-face meetings. She thanked me for it and is considering it.

Saying no worked.

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I wanna know ~

Do you find it difficult to turn down requests?

Are there things on your plate you'd like to unload?

Have you said no and been surprised at the positive results?

The Writer's Life: A Juggling Act?

2010-03-31T10:22:00.000-07:00

Time.

Do we ever have enough?

In the days before I embarked on my writing journey, I was doing well. Our one and only was in high school, and my days as an active parent volunteer had drawn to a close. I actually had time on my hands. My house was clean. The laundry was caught up. I had a weekly menu plan. And I was bored.

With the help of a life coach, I dug deep and rediscovered my dream: to be a writer.

The next two years rushed by as five stories flew from my fingertips. Talk about fun. I'd rarely had so much.

But writing in isolation grew old, and I became lonely.

And then I discovered cyberspace, the blogosphere, and a world peopled with other writers. I learned about heaps about craft, promotion, platforms, and more. I made friends. I was having fun again.

Trying to fit in all my new activities, however, became a challenge. In addition to writing, I'd added a host of other activities, including:

writing blog posts
interviewing blog guests
reading others' blogs
keeping up with email
reading and reviewing others' books
keeping up with my Yahoo! groups
maintaining my website
editing critique partners' work

I wish I could say I've become adept at juggling everything, but there are times I feel overwhelmed. I admire those who have children at home, write, and make it look easy. I wonder what their secrets are. I'm sure we could learn a great deal from them.

I wanna know ~

Do you struggle to juggle all your activities?

Do you have a set schedule for your writing time?

Do you have a system that helps you keep things running smoothly? If so, do share.

Blessings and Blooms

2010-03-28T00:07:00.000-07:00

Writers are wonderful people. I've been blessed by my writer friends on many occasions, and I'm beyond grateful. This past week, the blessings flowing my way left me feeling overwhelmed.

Thank you for your generosity, support, and encouragement. Thanks for lifting me up when I'm down and rejoicing with me when I receive good news.

Today I was blessed in a special way. A loud rap sounded on the front door. We weren't expecting anyone, so I wondered who it might be. I beat my husband to the door, opened it, and stared in disbelief. A florist stood there bearing a beautiful heart-shaped wicker basket filled with brightly colored violets.

I mumbled something resembling "thank you" to the florist. Puzzled, I turned to Gwynly, and asked if the flowers were from him. He often brings me flowers, but I couldn't imagine my frugal fellow having them delivered. However, he's been known to surprise me, even after twenty-two years of marriage. He shook his head.

Since the title of my current story is Violets & Violins, I suspected a writer friend. I opened the card and smiled. The unexpected gift was from my kind, caring, thoughtful critique partner, Anne Barton.

Thanks, Anne. You made my day!

I wanna know ~

How have you been blessed by fellow writers on your writing journey?

When's the last time someone surprised you with a gift? How did you react?

What is one gift you've received that was so perfect it left you marveling at the giver's thoughtfulness?

The Rigors of Revisions

2010-03-26T01:26:00.000-07:00

Where have I been the past month?

I've been hibernating in a place I call Revision Land. A sometimes scary, frequently frustrating place that saps my time, energy, and confidence, leaving me too drained to write witty blog posts. Much as I wish I were as consistent a blogger as my agency-mate Jody Hedlund with her insightful, instructional posts or as entertaining a storyteller as agency-mate Billy Coffey with his moving tales, lately my creativity has been drained by day's end, leaving me ready for my nightly date with Calgon, a few chapters of a romance novel, and little else.

Although I've not posted my progress in a month, I've moved ahead with my revisions. I've plotted the entire story, the first half in painstaking detail. (I'm a detail person, so it's really not painful at all. *grin*) I've got the second half figured out and will plot it scene by scene soon.

The first quarter of the story was 2,000 words too long, so I had to chop them. That was painful. By moving one scene later in the story, I cut 650 words, but I had well over one thousand to go. I didn't know what I could possibly remove, but I forced myself to scrutinize every word. Somehow, I made my goal and ended up with a leaner, cleaner beginning. What a lesson. I admire those who write tight. I'm not one of them, but I watched the first nine chapters improve as a result of my pruning.

I've moved on to writing the second quarter of the story. My agent, Rachelle Gardner, had pointed out how I'd reduced the tension. Well, I've ramped it up. There are some serious sparks now as my strong, determined, somewhat stubborn hero and heroine interact, and I'm having a ball adding them.

Because our college daughter has been home for spring break, I've taken this week off. We've shopped 'til we dropped, eaten out, and had a great time. I've also tackled a few items on my To-do List, one being giving my blog a more professional look, which was one of Jody's excellent suggestions. Now instead of flowers, my latest tweet appears. Kinda cool, don'tcha think?

Come Monday, I'll return to my story refreshed and ready to write. I'm missing my characters, and, from the amount of chatter in my head, I know they're eager for me to give them my attention.

I wanna know ~

Do you enjoy revisions, or do they put fear in your heart?

Do you write tight or tend to be a bit Dickensian like me?

Do you take vacations from writing to spend time with family?

Inspiration Infusion

2010-02-28T00:39:00.000-08:00

It's well after midnight as I write this. I should be tired. Instead, I'm wired.

Why?

Because I was blessed to attend a concert tonight and savor the sweet sounds one of the world's greatest violinists, Joshua Bell.

I'm hard pressed to choose adjectives that adequately describe the performance, but I'll do my best. Marvelous, magnificent, masterful. Superb, sensational, sublime.

And inspiring!

Several months ago, when I learned that Mr. Bell would be in concert at my daughter's university, I was elated. I hopped online to order my ticket. Thankfully, there were still a few available. I got a seat in the nosebleed section. Row G ~ for Grateful. Only one row was farther from the stage. Row H ~ for Higher Yet.

I arrived at the Performing Arts Center, sank into my plush seat, and prepared to enjoy myself. And I did!

Mr. Bell's talent is exemplary. He produced some of the sweetest sounds I've ever heard from his famous Stradivarius violin. He and pianist Jeremy Denk performed four sonatas from different composers: Bach, Saint-Saëns, Schumann, and Ravel. The variety of the pieces showcased Mr. Bell's skill beautifully.

The encore performance brought tears to my eyes. Mr. Bell chose a piece I've heard many times. I have three of his DVDs, and when I heard the first strains, I was transported to another time and place. My story world.

The reason I found the concert so inspiring is that I fell in love with the rich, warm sound of the violin three years ago when I wrote one of my historical inspirational romances, which is currently known as Violets & Violins. My two main characters are violinists, and I listen to violin pieces as I write. While looking for works I wanted to use in my story, I discovered Joshua Bell, and he quickly became my favorite violinist.

Because I was so far from the stage tonight, I was unable to watch Mr. Bell's fingerings. Instead I got the big picture. He feels the music and flows with it in graceful, swaying moves, which are a joy to behold.

Mr. Bell's passion for and love of his music remind me of the connection we writers feel to our stories and the joy creating them brings us. I'm inspired to take Violets & Violins to a new level and infuse it with more emotion and heart so it moves readers as Mr. Bell's music moved me
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Mr. Bell generously offered to autograph programs and recordings after the performance and let his fans get a picture with him. He was caught offguard by the woman who volunteered to snap this shot for me, but I was able to capture his warm smile in the picture at the top of the post.

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What inspires you as you craft your stories or pursue other creative endeavors?

Do you listen to music while writing? What kind?

Have you been blessed to meet a celebrity who's served as one of your sources of inspiration?

Revision: Jettison the Junk

2010-02-26T15:46:00.000-08:00

Many historical accounts of wagon trains trekking across the U.S. include heart-wrenching tales of weary travelers tossing their treasures in order to lighten the load. They were forced to focus on the essentials, so pianos, trunks, and other heavy items littered the trail.

The first phase of my revision process has been deleting the dross. Scene by scene, I've scrutinized my story, determining which of them stay and which must be cut.
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The Downside

I'm not going to gloss over things and tell you the elimination of a major portion of my story has been easy, because it hasn't. Being a sentimental person easily moved to tears, I've shed a few as I realized how much material I must remove in order for the story to take off in a new direction.

Yesterday I identified eight chapters in a row that have to go. That's 24 scenes, 86 pages, 735 paragraphs, or 19,469 words that are on their way out.

I shudder to think how many hours of my life were invested in writing those doomed chapters. In addition to creating my first draft, I spent time planning, researching, revising, and editing.

Others invested their time in my story as well. My hubby helped me plot, and he and our daughter listened to me talk about my story as I worked to get it right. Gwynly, my critique partner, and my agent took time to read all 111,000 words and give feedback.

Months of my life and weeks of the lives of people dear to me were, to look at things from a glass-half-empty perspective, wasted.

And I've only assessed the first half of the story. There's another 20-40K words destined to hit the chopping block as I cut even more scenes from the remainder of the story.

My emotions ran the gamut from miserable to excited the past week as I grasped the enormity of the task ahead of me.

Excited?

Yes. And here's why . . .

The Upside

After having taken time to grieve the loss of the story I'd written, I began to envision the one ready to emerge and grew excited.

Rather than viewing my story as a glass half empty, I realized it's really a glass half full. I have a beginning that has proven itself on the contest circuit. The first quarter of the book is in such great shape it needs only minor tweaking and tightening. And at least a quarter of the rest will work with a few modifications.

So, I'm halfway there!

In addition to seeing the status of the project in a more positive light, I've also realized the half that has to go does not represent a waste of my time. I learned a great deal and honed my skills while writing those chapters.

Although a large portion of the content no longer works because of the major plot change I'm making at the one quarter mark, what I'm deleting is not junk, dross, or rubbish. Those scenes are as well written as the ones I'm keeping. Thanks to my OC tendencies, perfectionism, and past experience as an assistant editor, I produce work so clean from a technical standpoint it practically squeaks. (Amazing what eighteen editing passes will do. *grin*) There are lines of dialogue, interesting incidents, and some clever turns of phrase I can save and use in other places. The scenes I'm deleting aren't bad, just no longer needed.

The Other Side

I'm sure the early settlers of California were excited when they stood atop the mighty Sierras and saw the breathtaking beauty before them. Rather than bemoaning the arduous journey and sacrifices they'd made to get there, they set their eyes on the prize and forged ahead with renewed energy and excitement.

I crested a hill today. Standing at the top, I shifted my gaze and looked back at how far I've come. Yes, I have a considerable amount of work yet to do, but when I look ahead now, I see a gentle slope leading to a not-so-distant destination.

I have the first half of my story outlined on my plotting boards. Gwynly--my ever-supportive husband and plotting partner--and I have brainstormed the second half. I've run the whole thing past my critique partner, incorporated her excellent feedback, and will plot the final 18 chapters over the next few days.

Since I've taken time to plan each scene before beginning the rewrite, the actual writing will flow. I'll have fun, and, because of my preparation, I won't have to make much use of the delete key. After having cut 140K of this story during two revisions, knowing I'm on the right track this time is very important to me.

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If you're a writer, have you ever faced deleting a major portion of your story?

How did you go about deciding what went and what stayed?

What did you learn through the process?

Writers and non-writers alike, are you a glass-half-empty or glass-half-full person?

Revision: Plotting Along

2010-02-19T17:30:00.000-08:00

"Where do I begin?"

That thought ran through my head a number of times since I received the revision notes from my agent, Rachelle Gardner. The first week, I had no idea how to answer the question. I needed time to absorb the feedback and allow myself to come to grips with the huge task ahead of me.

Another week has passed, and I'm eager to dig into my story. Before I begin, though, I have to rip my story apart chapter by chapter, scene by scene, remove what doesn't work, add new material, and put everything back together again. Here are the steps I'm taking.

Step 1: Jettison the Junk

One fourth of my story works--and works well. The opening has received more recognition than I could ever have imagined.

However, the story fell apart at the first major turning point. Without realizing it, I sabotaged my great beginning by moving things along too quickly and turning down the tension. Not good!

Some of the scenes in the final three-quarters of the book are great and may work with minor tweaking, but many of them have to go.

In order to discover how many chapters and scenes can stay and which will go by the wayside, I literally took my story apart. I cut my hard copy into scenes and slapped stickies on them. A check mark on a scene means it stays, an X means it's history, and a question mark means I'm not sure yet.

Step 2: Assess the Mess

Once I determine how much of the story I can use, I expect to end up with about half of it needing to be written anew. Since I love the characters, enjoy writing a rough draft, and am eager to take the rest of my story from ho-hum to happening, I'm excited.

My task now is to figure out where the holes are. To do that, I took the advice my awesome critique partner, Anne Barton, has given me on several occasions and made a set of plotting boards. Because I'm a visual person, having the story laid out before me will show me many things, including where I need to add chapters and scenes to fill in the gaps.

Step 3: Plot the Lot

When I wrote my first stories, I did very little plotting. I had an idea where my story was going, but I didn't take time to draft an overall plan. Since I tend to be OC, this surprises me. In retrospect, I think writing the stories from my heart served a purpose. I learned to go with the flow, which, for a perfectionist like me, was a valuable lesson.

Now, however, I see the value in having a plan. In fact, I won't write another story without one. Frankly, it's too much work. This is my third revision of Violets & Violins, and it's going to be more challenging in many ways than the other two. I'm up for it, but in the future I intend to spare myself the trouble.

To make my plotting boards, I bought 22 x 28 inch white poster board with a faint grid pattern. I got packages of three sheets at Office Max. Using a yardstick and a fine point black Sharpie, I broke the board into 5-1/2 x 8 inch boxes with one-inch headers. (Vertical lines at 5-1/2, 11, and 16-1/2 inches. Horizontal lines at 1, 9, 10, 18, and 19 inches.) Because I like things even, I cut off the bottom inch so the boxes would be the same size.

I then added a header for each box. The first row begins with "Chapter 1 ~ Scene 1" and ends with "Chapter 1 ~ Scene 4." It's rare that I have more than four scenes per chapter, so this format should work well for me. I created 13 plotting boards, which will cover up to 39 chapters, the maximum number I've had.

Step 4: Glean the Scenes

Each scene of my book will fill one box on the plotting board. In the picture above, you'll see the first three chapters of my book laid out in mock-up form. Chapter one has three scenes, the others just two.

Next, I have fun with sticky notes. I use a couple of two-inch squares and one four-inch lined square per scene. Stickies work well because I can move them around easily as I shift scenes within the story.

The small sticky on the left is where I list the characters. The color identifies the POV character. Since I write romances, there are usually just two: the hero and heroine. A blue sticky is for the hero, and pink identifies scenes where the POV is the heroine's. If I have other POV characters, each would receive a different color. On the POV character's sticky I list other characters who appear in the scene.

The small sticky on the right tells me when and where the scene takes place.

The large sticky is for the what, why, and how of the scene. I use two colors. In my example, orange indicates scenes where I am pulling the hero and heroine apart. Purple is when I give the characters and the reader a respite--and some hope that things are going to work out. If I see too much purple, I know I need to ramp up the tension and increase the conflict.

What is happening? I give a brief overview of what takes place in the scene.

Why is this scene included? I list the reasons why this scene is important to the story. This step helps me justify every scene. I like to have at least two reasons for each scene.

What devices are used? I list the techniques I use in a scene, e.g. dialogue, internal monologue, action, narration.

Here's the first scene from my story as an example.

I'm busy filling my plotting boards at this point, using information from existing scenes as well as new ones Gwynly, my hubby and plotting partner extraordinaire, and I have brainstormed.

As I move through the plotting process, I'll be sharing what I'm learning.

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If you're a writer, do you tend to be a pantser or a plotter?

What steps do you take before you begin writing a story?

Do you think a plotting board would help you?

If you're not a writer, how do you go about preparing for a major project?

Revision Notes

2010-02-16T11:25:00.000-08:00

Many an author has blogged or tweeted about receiving Revision Notes. Often the initial reaction ranges from shock to mild surprise. Some even admit to discouragement or dismay.

I've often wondered what was included in Revision Notes that would bring about such a strong reaction. Sure, I had an idea, having read blog posts for over two years, but those accounts didn't satisfy my curiosity.

In recent weeks, I've been able to view two sets of Notes, one belonging to a brave novelist friend who shared hers with me, and the other the Notes my agent, Rachelle Gardner, sent me a week ago. Because some of you may be as curious as I was, I'm going to give you a glimpse of mine.

Before I share what was in my Notes, I want to make it clear that Rachelle called and spent an hour going over everything that was in them before I ever saw them in print. Had she not done so, I might have been devastated to read her comments and suggestions. However, Rachelle isn't known as one of the best agents out there for nothing. Her fellow agent Chip MacGregor says she's "nice," and she is. She took the time to share her thoughts with a wonderful balance of compassion and directness. I had to hear truth if my story is to improve, but she delivered it in a way that honored me and my story, and I'm extremely grateful for that.

And now, for the promised peek at my Revision Notes . . .

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Format

My Editorial Memo, which is what Rachelle called my Revision Notes, consists of four single-spaced pages. Rachelle worked for many years as an editor and edited for some big name authors such as Brandilyn Collins, Mary DeMuth, and Lisa Samson. The Memo I received is much like that my friend received from an editor at a major publishing house, both in appearance and content.

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Content

Rachelle broke the content into the following sections:

Opening - Rachelle began with almost a full page of compliments. She listed what she liked about the story, what she sees as its strengths, and what areas of craft she thinks I handled well. (To be honest, this was my favorite part of the Memo. *grin*)
Transition - After having noted the strengths in my story and my writing, Rachelle took two paragraphs to explain the motivation behind her upcoming suggestions. She also reassured me that she knows this is my story and has no intention of meddling with my Voice, honors me as a writer, and is open to discussing my concerns or areas in which I may disagree with her.
Concerns - Rachelle has two, each of which filled an entire page. While that may sound overwhelming, her explanation enabled me to understand what she meant and why the two weaknesses she spotted are concerns. She clearly stated each, gave sound reasons for them, and made suggestions as to how I can address them. (For the record, I agree with her and am in the process of plotting my fix.)
Characters - My two main characters, which I like to call the hero and heroine, each received two paragraphs of comments. Rachelle shared what she liked about them and enlightened me as to what she sees as shortcomings.
Pacing - Rachelle suggested I reread my story and note areas of repetition. She pointed out several chapters where the pacing is slow.
Length - I submitted a 111K story, so I wasn't surprised to hear it has to be tightened and cut to 100K.
Conclusion - Rachelle offered to assist me through the process.

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Intangibles

Expertise - It was easy to see that Rachelle knows her stuff. Her experience and grasp of the editing process are evident. Although it wasn't easy to hear that my story has some major weaknesses, I realize she's right and am grateful to her for pointing them out.
Personality - Rachelle's clients speak very highly of her. I see why. Receiving one's first Editorial Memo can be overwhelming. She herself used the term "shell-shocked" to describe the reaction many experience. My experience was far more positive than I had expected. Rachelle treats her clients, even newbie writers like me whose story isn't yet all I believed it to be, with respect and consideration. Not that she sugarcoats things. (For example, my letter includes such phrases as "The problem is that it's totally unbelievable . . ." and "None of this rings true." Taken out of context, those statements may sound harsh. I don't feel that way. She says what needs to be said, but she couches it very well.
Support - Throughout the letter, I picked up on the fact that Rachelle believes in my story, despite it's rather glaring weaknesses. (That description is mine, not hers, btw.) She assured me it can be fixed and gave me great suggestions on how to go about it. I also feel that she believes in my ability as a writer, which she conveyed in many ways throughout the Memo.

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I'll be exploring the various aspects of the letter in more depth as I go through the revision process and will share my thoughts in future blog posts.

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Questions for you

If you're a writer and have received Revision Notes or an Editorial Memo, what was your initial reaction? Did you agree of disagree with the agent or editor's suggestions?

If you're a writer who has yet to receive Notes or a Memo, were you surprised by what was in mine?

My First Interview

2010-02-14T21:25:00.000-08:00

My awesome critique partner, Anne Barton, asked to interview lil ol’ me. After all Anne’s done for me, I couldn’t turn her down.

Anne is talented, creative, and clever. She came up with an interview format I’ve never seen before, one that was tonz of fun. If you drop by her blog, Anne Barton’s Writing Journal, you can see why I’m so impressed–and learn more about me and my writing journey.

If you leave a comment, you’ll have a shot at winning the Starbucks card she’s giving away.

Visions and Revisions

2010-02-10T20:50:00.000-08:00

Surprise!

Yes. I radically changed the look of my blog.

Why?

Because I have a new perspective. God blessed me this week. He used two people to speak truth to me, and my eyes were opened. I'm filled with hope, joy, and a burgeoning sense of excitement.

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One of the people who helped me is my friend and life coach. Four years ago, when my daughter had started high school and no longer needed me in the ways she had before, Karin helped me explore my interests and identify my long-time dream of being a writer.

As some of you know, I was given a tremendous Christmas gift this past December: an offer of representation from Rachelle Gardner of WordServe Literary. I shared this exciting news with Karin, who rejoiced with me. This week I asked her to don her life coach hat once again and help me examine my priorities since I'm in a far different place than I was when we'd last worked together. One of my desires is to help other writers in whatever ways I can.

In the past I've been hesitant to share my struggles. To admit I wage a daily battle with self-doubt. To be real.

No more. Karin helped me see that exposing my vulnerabilities can be beneficial to me and to others.

When I interview my guests at Romance Writers on the Journey, I often ask them questions about discouragement and doubt. Their answers have inspired me. I've learned I'm not alone in my feelings of inadequacy. I've also seen how encouraging it can be to hear how my guests faced their challenges and what they learned as a result of them.

So, I'm going to shake off my self-constraints, be more honest about the ups and downs of my journey, and hope I can be a source of encouragement to others as so many have been to me.

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The second person who spoke truth this week was my awesome agent. When Rachelle made her offer of representation, she told me my story needed work. She called this week to discuss the revisions.

I'd had six weeks to worry about what Rachelle's concerns were. And when it comes to worrying, sad to say, I'm an expert. My critique partner, Anne Barton, suggested I write down everything Rachelle might say, which I did. My Worst Case Scenario List included the need to work on characterization, believability, pacing, plot issues, and length–to name a few.

Rachelle called this past Monday, and we spent an hour going over her thoughts on my story. I learned that my List wasn't BIG enough. The story was in worse shape than I thought. In the course of our conversation, she showed me how I had started with a great conflict. However, I had inadvertently released the tension one fourth of the way into the story. She likened it to letting the air out of the balloon too soon.

The fix? Are you ready?

I have to rewrite the final three-quarters of the book. Actually, that's not exactly true. I have to write a new story, the one that goes with the new beginning I'd added.

What? Ditch 75,000 words and start over?

Yup! But not to worry. I'm fine with that. In fact, I'm honestly looking forward to it. Rachelle saw the major weaknesses in my story, which I had been unable to see, and conveyed them to me with a balance of compassion and directness I admire and appreciate. Because I want to produce the best story I possibly can, I'm more than willing to press "delete" and start over.

Those of you who remember that I spent a significant portion of last year rewriting this very story may wonder how I can face a massive rewrite and not be disheartened, dismayed, and depressed. I can do so because of my perspective. I have a new vision of what my story can become.

I spent five years working for a special education textbook publishing company some years ago, one of those as an assistant editor. When I began writing, I didn't entertain starry-eyed visions of selling my first book. I knew I had a great deal to learn and expected my path to publication to span several years.

Four years have passed since I began writing. Because I'm a teacher's wife, I will use an education analogy and liken this time to earning my bachelor's in creative writing. I've graduated and embarked on the next phase, that of working with my esteemed professor (aka my agent) and am now pursuing my Master's degree. My thesis project is my novel. Under the tutelage of my knowledgeable instructor, Dr. Gardner, I will learn how to take my writing to the next level.

I'm on a journey, one I knew would involve highs and lows. While some might view the news I received as a downer, I don't see it that way. I have a story Rachelle and I believe has potential to be something far greater than it is now; her knowledge, experience, and guidance; the support and assistance of my husband and critique partner, among many others; and a desire to put forth the effort required to produce a story worthy of submission.

In addition, I have a Savior who upholds me and Who has revealed to me repeatedly that I'm where He wants me to be. I look forward to seeing what He has in store and in sharing my progress (and my pitfalls) with you.

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Have there been times in your life when someone spoke truth and gave you a new way of viewing a situation or circumstance? How did you respond? What did you learn from the experience?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2010-01-29T07:33:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

Rejoicing with my agency mates . . .

Jody Hedlund and Karen Witemeyer got to spend two days at Bethany House with Rachelle Gardner. I read on Twitter that Jody got to see her cover. I hope all of you had a great time. It must have been exciting to talk with the people who are working so hard to get the books ready for readers.
Katie Ganshert's book went out to eight more publishing houses, taking the number considering her story to nine. How very exciting, Katie! I hope you receive BIG news very soon. I'm eager to join in your First Sale happy dance.

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Rejoicing with my writer pals and blogging buddies . . .

Kristen Torres-Toro got moved and started her new ministry job on her 26th birthday. I'm glad to hear you've made the transition and hope you soon feel settled. And a belated happy birthday to you.
Terri Tiffany got a job as a social worker, one with a great salary and excellent benefits. I'm jumping for joy, Terri. I know how long you've been looking. You clung to your faith, and the Lord has richly blessed you. I hope you find the position to be one you enjoy and that your colleagues are a great group to work with.

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Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

CJ Redwine's cat didn't survive its battle with an infection. I'm so sorry, CJ. Our pets add so much to our lives, and it hurts when we lose them.
Jessica Nelson and Laura Frantz aren't feeling well. I can empathize. My dear hubby shared his cold with me, and I'm writing this while dealing with a fuzzy head. Here's to restored health for us and anyone else who's battling a bug.

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2010-01-22T17:54:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

Rejoicing with my agency mates . . .

Dr. Richard Mabry's debut medical romantic suspense novel, Code Blue, went out to reviewers this week. I'm excited for you, Richard, because I know it won't be long until you're receiving wonderful feedback from your readers.

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Rejoicing with my writer pals and blogging buddies . . .

Jessica Nelson made a decision to shift her focus from historicals to contemporaries because her heart is in the contemporaries. I'm happy to see you following your heart, Jessie. I wish you much joy as you work on your contemporary stories

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Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Eileen Astels Watson has been battling a nasty head cold. I hope you send that pesky bug packing very soon, Eileen. I think it should be part of the Mom contract that we mothers shouldn't have to deal with being sick ourselves. How can we care for our precious children when we feel crummy?
Erica Vetsch, my agency mate, got braces this week and has been dealing with a sore mouth. I think it's cool when an adult can get orthondontia that may not have been possible earlier in life, but I'm sorry to hear your first week with braces has been rough. I was blessed with straight teeth, so I never had to deal with this, but my poor daughter had to have crowns put on all 28 of her teeth due to having no enamel on them, so I know from watching her 18-month mouth reconstruction process that dental pain is no fun. Cyber hugs, Erica.

Weekly Writing Recap: R & R

2010-01-17T22:55:00.000-08:00

R & R.

We all need it from time to time.

I've spent a good portion of the past two weeks recuperating and recharging. Not from the holidays. Actually, thanks to the Fashion Queen, we were ready for Christmas the day after Thanksgiving. She didn't want to head back to college until the tree was up with the wrapped presents under it. I was fine with that since it was much more fun to have her here to take part in the preparations.

My need for R & R stemmed from the fact that I'd spent months rewriting my story. Taking it apart, deleting 70K words, shifting the remaining ones around, adding lots of new material, putting it all together and polishing it was an intense undertaking.

Would I do it again? You betcha!

Why?

Because I learned so much about craft. Because I enjoyed watching my story improve before my eyes. And because I rediscovered the joy of writing, something I'd lost during the year of my Confidence Crisis.

That said, I don't intend to repeat the the process. Even though I gained a great deal as a result of my experience and don't regret the time, effort and fortitude it took to take my story apart and put it back together again, I realized there's a better way.

And what's that?

Plotting.

It may be hard to believe, but detail-oriented person though I may be, I wrote my first five plus stories as a pantser. Next time, I'll be working from an outline and will know where I'm heading before I begin, what the major turning points are and how to move from one to the next. This isn't to say that being a pantser is a bad thing. I'm merely saying that method of writing doesn't work for me. It leads to more work.

So, what have I been doing? Catching up on the many things I'd let slide during the months of concentrated effort. Lining up some wonderful guests for my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey. Editing my critique partner's Regency Romance. Having fun with my hubby and helping him celebrate a milestone birthday. And getting excited about my next story. The characters are chatting away, and I'm taking notes.

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If you're a writer, do you tend to be a seat-of-the-pants writer or one who prefers to plot a story before you begin?

When you complete a major project, what do you do to recuperate and recharge?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2010-01-15T23:12:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

Rejoicing with my agency mates . . .

Erica Vetsch had a great week. She launched her new website, received the bookmarks for her second book, The Marriage Masquerade, and finished her latest story and got it off to her writing partners. Way to go, Erica! What an awesome week. And I know next week will be fun because I'm privileged to have you as my guest at Romance Writers on the Journey on Thursday.
Jody Hedlund received the second round of revisions from her editor. She did so well on her first set that she has very little to change this time. Congrats, Jody! I knew you could do it. I feel certain you'll get this round done in short order and hear high praise from your editor.

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Rejoicing with my writer pals and blogging buddies . . .

Lynn Rush took first place in a contest called Write Your Name Across the Sky, which is sponsored by The Book Boost. Her prize is publication and a year of promotion. In addition, she signed with TribeLit. Mega congrats, Lynn! What a week you've had. Bet you haven't put any wear on the soles of your shoes. I'm so happy for you. Enjoy the thrill!
Sherrinda Ketchersid spent a week on a Treehouse Getaway with her hubby celebrating their 25th anniversary and had a great time. Welcome back, Sherrinda. I'm glad you and your very own hero were able to enjoy a week together in such an awesome setting. What wonderful memories you must have.
T. Anne Adams hired a writing coach and feels very blessed. Yay for you, T. Anne! I hope the collaboration works well for you.

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Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Rachelle Gardner, my agent, ended her query hiatus and dealt with a full email inbox that, according to her tweet on Twitter, took her the entire day to process. I can't imagine how demanding the life of a literary agent must be, but you do a great job for your clients, Rachelle, and still offer so much to the writing community at large. I'm impressed and appreciative.
Dr. Richard Mabry, my agency mate, is awaiting the first reviews of his novel, Code Blue, which has gone out to reviewers and potential endorsers. I feel for you, Dr. Mabry. I trust, though, that very soon you'll have more wonderful reviews than you ever thought possible.

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2010-01-08T13:27:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.

Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

Here's some good news I discovered while visiting blogs, reading tweets and stopping by Facebook this week.

From my agency mates:

Katie Ganshert – Katie’s revisions are going well. I’m glad to hear you’re making progress, Katie. Here’s to even more.

Dr. Richard Mabry – On December 17, Dr. Mabry published a blog post sharing the news that he received a contract for his second and third novels in his Prescription For Trouble series. Even though my shout out is late, I offer my congratulations. What wonderful news!

From my blogging buddies and writer pals:

Cindy R. Wilson – Cindy has completed her proposal and is ready to begin querying. Yay for you, Cindy! I hope the requests start pouring in.

Krista Phillips – Krista shared the news that she’s expecting her fourth child. Wow, Krista! How exciting. Hope the pregnancy goes well.

Laura Frantz – Laura completed her read of the galleys for her second book, Courting Morrow Little. Way to go, Laura! I’m looking forward to reading Morrow’s story.

Lynn Rush – Lynn finaled in the paranormal category of The Launching a Star contest and received a request for a full from the editor who served as the final round judge. Congratulations, Lynn! I hope the request leads to even more good news.

Sherrinda Ketchersid – Sherrinda and her hubby celebrated 25 years of marriage by staying in a treehouse. Happy Anniversary, Sherrinda! I hope your time in that unique location was wonderful.

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Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Weekly Writing Recap: Amazing Writers

2010-01-03T20:17:00.001-08:00

I love reading the work of amazing writers.

This week I've been privileged to enjoy the work of five different writers. One is my Pixie pal CJ Redwine, whose stories I help edit. (2008 GH finalist = Pixie.) In describing her stories, amazing could be considered an understatement. Her Voice is unlike that of any other writer I know. Creative. Clever. Comical. I couldn't write like her if I tried. Frankly, I'm not that quick-witted, and I'm certainly not that funny. CJ tells an action-packed, tremendously entertaining story that keeps me scrolling as quickly as I can. I feel certain that one day soon her stories will be on the shelves, and I've no doubt scores of readers will be posting glowing reviews.

Reading contest entries is like tearing open the prize in a box of Cracker Jack™, a special treat my dad used to bring home for my sisters and me. As was the case back then when I ripped open that colorful envelope, I never know what to expect when I open a contest entry.

This week I got a sneak peek at the creations of four entrants in a contest I judged. I marveled at their creativity. All show promise as writers, and I look forward to the time when I can tell each of them I enjoyed their work back in the days before they were published.

One of these writers did something that rarely happens when I read an entry. I was swept into the story and forgot to judge it. I read for sheer pleasure. The writer pulled me in so fast my internal editor shut down. In order to complete the score sheet, I had to go back and read the piece more slowly. Even then, I savored the wonderful writing and forced myself not to break one of the Commandments, the one that begins "Thou shalt not covet . . ." God didn't happen to finish with ". . . another writer's Voice," but it would have fit. Reading that entry was like tearing open that little prize package and finding a treat far better than I'd expected.

In between my reading and editing, Gwynly and I helped the Fashion Queen celebrate her 19th birthday on January 1st. Yup! We had a New Year's baby. It's hard to believe our one and only has begun her final year as a teen. Then again, it's hard to believe I passed the half-century mark last summer. Where did the years go?

As is the Fashion Queen's tradition, she was up early to watch the Tournament of Roses Parade with bleary eyes. The phone rang near the end of the telecast. I assumed it was a birthday call for her. Nope. It was the historical category coordinator for The Emily. V&V finaled again. I really didn't expect it to do so since this contest doesn't have an inspirational category. I entered this contest anyway because they take sub-categories into consideration, among them inspirational. I thought it might be fun to see how my story would do outside its usual genre. Guess it has wider appeal than I thought.

All in all, it's been a fun week, and the year is off to a great start. I look forward to working with my agent and getting V&V revised and ready for submission. I also look forward to hanging with you, my blogging buddies, and sharing in your happy dances. And I can dance. Just ask my cats. I've sent them flying numerous times this past year as I shook my booty of your behalf.

I wish you all the very best in 2010!

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2010-01-01T23:05:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.

My apologies for not posting last week. I was still floating after receiving my amazing Christmas present. (See previous post.)
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

I visited blogs and read some great posts, but since things are quiet in the blogosphere during the holiday, I didn't find any nuggets to share with you. However, I feel certain good things took place as you spent time with family and friends. I'd love to hear about a special moment that touched your heart.

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Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

The holidays can be a tough time for those who've experienced loss or are going through a trial. If you had a less than Merry Christmas and feel comfortable sharing about it, I'd like to offer you an ear and a cyber shoulder.

Weekly Writing Recap: My Early Christmas Present

2009-12-23T20:07:00.000-08:00

I'm posting my recap early because I have news I can't wait to share.

I have an agent!

Let me clarify that.

I am now represented by top-notch agent Rachelle Gardner!

Oh. My. Gosh!

Those are the three words I shouted repeatedly last Saturday night when I checked my email. Gwynly and I celebrated our anniversary on the 19th, and he'd taken me out for dinner at Olive Garden, a place we reserve for special occasions. I'd admitted to my critique partner that I would also be celebrating the fact that I'd hit "send" the night before, submitting my story after months of revision.

When I saw the name Rachelle Gardner in my in-box Saturday night, I couldn't believe it. I didn't get too excited, though, since I'd expected her to tell me thanks for getting the full to her but that she couldn't get to it until after the holidays. I opened the message, beheld the first few words and started shouting.

"I'd like to discuss the possibility of representation . . ."

I didn't even read the rest of the message at first. I was stunned and started shouting. Gwynly and the Fashion Queen figured out what was happening and assured our two cats that it was good news. The fuzzy fellows didn't buy it and hid.

Me? I was told I rushed from room to room repeating those three words, "Oh, my gosh!" at the top of my lungs. I vaguely recall clutching the walls, doorjambs and backs of chairs while my hubby and daughter raced to my computer to read the message. They promptly joined me, gathered me in a group hug, and jumped up and down with me in what has become our version of the Happy Dance.

I don't know how long I carried on, but I know it must have been a while because I was hoarse the next day and croaked out the carols in church.

Because it's Christmas time and because I know Rachelle was trying to catch up on her agency work, I didn't expect to hear from her until after the holidays. However, dedicated agent that she is, she called me tonight. Since I'd had four days to absorb the amazing news, I did a passable job of sounding in control. At least I hope I did. :-)

Rachelle likes my story, but it needs some work before it will be ready for submission. Since I'm a new writer, I wasn't surprised to hear that. Having spent months taking Violets & Violins apart and putting it back together again, I'm up for the challenge. I did my research and know one of Rachelle's many strengths is editing, so I look forward to learning from her and watching my story get better under her tutelage.

I remarked to my family that this was the best Christmas present I could imagine. While it is wonderful, it wouldn't have been possible without the support of my husband, daughter, critique partner, extended family, church family, friends, writing buddies, contest judges and many others too numerous to name. I treasure each one of you and thank you very much for believing in me.

I wish you a blessed celebration of Christ's birth.

Weekly Writing Recap: Relief

2009-12-20T14:21:00.000-08:00

This past Friday evening, I heaved a huge sigh.

Why?

After months of hard work involving a complete rewrite of the Violets & Violins, more editing passes than I want to think about, judicious use of the delete key and incorporation of my critique partners' excellent suggestions, I sent my story into the world.

My last submission took place over two years ago. At that point, after the inevitable rejections, I realized I'd been hasty in sending my work out. My writing wasn't at a publishable level, and, hard as it was, I accepted that fact.

I spent the next year doing two things. I focused less on writing and more on learning my craft. I also established a web presence and met many wonderful writers, authors and blogging buddies.

When I returned to my writing this past spring, I sensed a change. After a short-lived foray into contemporary romance the prior year, I returned to my first love, historicals, and set to work rewriting one of the five stories I'd completed in my first two years.

I entered contests to get feedback and see if my work fared better. It did! Violets & Violins has soared through the contest circuit, taking first place six times. (I received notification of my first in the Southern Heat inspirational category this afternoon.)

Upon completing my final editing pass of V&V, I prepared my manuscript and synopsis files, drafted a query letter and, with a trembling finger, hit "send." And my literary baby winged its way through cyberspace.

What's next?

First, I cleaned house. The laundry is underway now. I'm preparing to excavate in my office so I can get to my computer without having to burrow my way through the small room. Then I'll enjoy Christmas with my family.

And after that?

My dear sweet heroine, Rebecca, who waited patiently while I worked on Elenora's story, will get my attention. I've already begun the rewrite of Becky's story, which was one of my 2008 Golden Heart finalist entries. Once the Fashion Queen is back at college and Gwynly has returned to teaching teens the value of chemistry, I'll hang with Rebecca and James on a regular basis.

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If you're a writer, how do you know when to stop tweaking a manuscript and submit it?

Have you ever started a project and headed in one direction, shifted part way through and learned later you had been on the right track to begin with?

Does your house look like a disaster area when you finish a major project, or are you able to keep things in order all along? If the latter, please share your secrets.

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I wish you a blessed celebration of Christmas.

I'm eager to spend the time with Gwynly and the Fashion Queen here at home. We have the privilege of lighting the Christ candle at our church's Candlelight Service on Christmas Eve. We'll see what's in our stockings when we get home and watch the Muppet Christmas Carol. The next day, we'll open our gifts, wrapped in colorful drawstring bags, while carols play.

What are your plans?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2009-12-18T21:24:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

My awesome critique partner and dear friend Anne Barton completed the read of my manuscript. I'm so very grateful to you, Anne. As I read the story straight through after implementing your wonderful suggestions and saw your fingerprints throughout, I was moved to tears. Your contributions added so much to the story. Thanks heaps.

Jenness Walker drove over a downed power line, was forced to say in her truck until the power company could cut the juice to the wire she was in contact with, and lived to tell the tale in a memorable blog post. Jenness, I am so thankful you were safe, thanks to some real life heroes. What an ordeal that must have been. You'll have to use this in a story.
Katie Ganshert is very close to finishing the rough draft of her work-in-progress. Way to go, Katie! Have fun getting your characters to their HEA.
Laura Frantz received the galleys for her second book, Courting Morrow Little. What fun, Laura! I'm glad you got to spend time with your characters again.

Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Weekly Writing Recap: Gratitude

2009-12-13T23:34:00.000-08:00

I'm filled with gratitude after a full and interesting week.

Writing-related Reasons I'm Grateful

I got the rest of the chapters of Violets & Violins off to my critique partner today. All that remains for me to do is to correct the typos Anne found and implement many of her great suggestions.
Thanks to agent's Jessica Faust's recent blog post for which Anne sent me the link, I know just what I need to include in the query that accompanies a manuscript requested by a final round contest judge, and I feel prepared to write it.
Anne edited a whopping 20 chapters for me this week. Is she amazing or what?

Other Reasons I'm Grateful

Gwynly and I experienced a record snowstorm here in the Sierra Foothills, which shut down our town of Placerville, California on Monday when much of the area lost power. Since all the schools in the county but one closed, I got to have my teacher hubby home for two extra days this week. We were only without power for 24 hours, while others went without for three days or more. Although we were without heat, the inside temperature only got down to 47 degrees. We had phone service, hot and cold water and use of our propane stove top throughout the outage.
On Wednesday, Gwynly and I picked up our college daughter and will enjoy the Fashion Queen's company for three and a half weeks.

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What are you grateful for?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2009-12-11T23:19:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

My awesome critique partner and dear friend Anne Barton took the top award in the Golden Rose contest for the highest overall score beating out a whopping 172 entrants. I'm sooo proud of you, Anne, and can't wait to see a picture of you holding that beautiful gold-dipped rose.

Diane Estrella sent her manuscript out into the publishing world for the first time. Way to go, Diane! That's a huge step. Here's hoping for positive feedback.
Jenness Walker learned that her debut novel, Double Take, was nominated for both best Love Inspired Suspense and Best First Series Romance in the annual Romantic Times Book Reviews Reviewers Choice Awards. Woohoo, Jenness! What exciting news! I'm glad your writing is being so well received.
Katie Ganshert is making great progress on her work-in-progress. Kudos, Katie! What fun to spend time with your characters and get more of their story on the page.
Sarah Tormey is expecting her first child. Congratulations, Sarah! I wish you a pleasant pregnancy and a healthy baby.

Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Terri Tiffany learned that her mother has cancer. My heart goes out to you and your mom, Terri. May you feel the love and support of family and friends during this difficult time, and may the Lord grant you the strength you need to make it through each day.

Eileen Astels Watson was unable to add any pages to her work-in-progress this week due to commitments and an under-the-weather washing machine. I hope life settles down and you're able to get back to your story soon, Eileen.
Sherrinda Ketchersid was unable to do any editing of her manuscript this week due to a full schedule and holiday-related activities. I love your positive attitude about this temporary situation, Sherrinda, and feel certain you'll make great progress when your vacation begins.

Weekly Writing Recap: Dreams

2009-12-06T21:12:00.000-08:00

I've heard of writers who dream of the day they get published. Literal while-they-sleep dreams about getting a request, an offer of representation or even The Call.

Me? I dream about my characters, scenes I'm working on or, on occasion, upcoming conferences. But until recently, I'd never had a dream that involved a publishing professional.

That changed last week. I had my first ever dream about talking with an agent who was interested in representing me, an agent who was gracious, kind and helpful. One who exhibited professionalism, was personable and put me at ease, all at the same time. One I'd be thrilled to have represent me.

I awoke wondering if one day that dream will become reality. It could happen, right? Sometimes dreams do come true.

I have a ray of hope.

This weekend I received two calls telling me about additional requests for my full manuscript, taking the number up to four. I was so excited after the second call, I got carried away in my happy dancing and bit my lip. My minor injury didn't stop me from beaming though.

When I entered Violets & Violins in contests this fall, I had hoped for a final or two and even dared to dream of a top placement. But to get requests? I'd hardly dared hope for that. And yet it's happened to me. I'm still pinching myself and smiling broadly despite my fat lip.

I've been hesitant to share the news of my requests, but I have permission from the contest coordinators to go public. Since many of you reading my blog are writers, too, I offer my news as encouragement. I've invested four years in my writing, and I'm seeing my hard work pay off. It can happen, and it's my hope that each of you see the rewards of your diligence and devotion to your writing. I love sharing in your happy dances, although in the future I think I'll keep my mouth closed when I do them. :-)

I've attempted to enjoy every step on my journey. However, I'm the first to admit that I've encountered my share of potholes, battled more self-doubt than I care to think about and worn Gwynly's ears out with my need for affirmation.

This weekend has been a great boost to my confidence. Not only did I receive news of the requests, but I also learned that V&V took first place in the inspirational category of the Golden Pen.

In spite of all of the good news I've experienced recently, I still wrestle with two of my biggest foes: fear and perfectionism. I fear my stories aren't good enough. I fear I'll get my hopes up only to have them dashed. I fear I'll never conquer my fears.

Please, tell me I'm not alone.

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Do you dare to dream?

What are some of your dreams?

Do you ever suffer a confidence crisis?

Is fear one of your foes? How do you deal with it?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2009-12-04T13:15:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

Several of my writer friends won NaNoWriMo. Some I know about are Cindy R. Wilson, Eileen Astels Watson and Susan Hollaway. Congratulations! That's quite an accomplishment.
My writer friend Sherrinda Ketchersid is making good progress on her edits and her weight loss goals. Way to go!
My writer friend and Pixie pal (2008 GH finalists) Sue Mason got her Golden Heart entry on its way as did my critique partner Anne Barton. Three cheers for you. I wish you all the best.
My writer friend Katie Ganshert's book is being reviewed by an editorial team. Yay, Katie, on getting so far so fast. May this lead to a contract offer.
My new writer friend Terra has a book out, one she co-authored with five friends: Scrapbook of Christmas Firsts: Stories to Warm Your Heart and Tips to Simplify Your Holidays.

Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Weekly Writing Recap: Relief

2009-11-29T12:22:00.000-08:00

An event took place November 24th that left me with a smile spread across my face and a load off my shoulders.

After months spent rewriting Violets & Violins and weeks polishing the first three chapters until they shone so brightly I needed sunglasses to read them, my dear Gwynly took me to the Post Office. David, one of the many friendly and knowledgeable clerks who has processed my contest entries throughout the past four years, took the package from my trembling hands. The box containing my hopes and dreams, as well as six copies of my 2010 Golden Heart entry and a CD containing the complete manuscript, was on its way. When I told David this was the most important contest of the year, he smiled and said, "Then you want the insurance on this, don't you?" He's got the drill down.

Getting to the point where I could release my story wasn't easy. I experienced a moment of panic the night before and told Gwynly and my awesome critique partner, Anne Barton, I needed to read the entire story one more time. After ensconcing myself in the comfy armchair before our pellet stove, I toasted my tootsies and began turning pages.

Three and a half chapters into the manuscript, reality dawned. I had one day before our daughter was due home for her Thanksgiving break and a number of tasks to complete prior to picking her up. There weren't enough hours left in which to read a 100,000 word story and prepare for our long-awaited visit from the Fashion Queen. Enough was enough. The time had come to put family first.

A tremendous sense of relief washed over me when I walked out of the Post Office last Tuesday. Not only was my entry on its way, but I'd achieved a minor victory. I'd allowed pragmatism to triumph over perfectionism, not an easy task for me as Gwynly and Anne know. Because of my decision, Gwynly, the Fashion Queen and I enjoyed a relaxed Thanksgiving and had fun cutting our tree and decorating the house the day after.

In other contest news, I received my brooch from the Lone Star Contest last week. I like the way the Northwest Houston RWA chose to combine the star with a pen. I'll wear this beautiful bit of bling proudly.

And what's next?

I've started sending chapters of V&V to Anne, who is working her magic on them. Not only does she catch the pesky typos and grammatical goofs I missed, but she also comes up with great words to replace some weak ones that slipped past me. And when it comes to wonderful chapter ending hooks, she's downright masterful. With her help, V&V is better than I dreamed possible. When I think of all the things I'm thankful for this year, having Anne as my CP is high on the list. But far more important than that, I'm grateful for her steadfast support and friendship.

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Are you a recovering perfectionist? If so, how do you force yourself to let go of a project?

Are you more of an easygoing person. If so, what tips can you offer those of us who have a hard time knowing when to stop?

Do you have a person who supports you in your creative endeavors? What are some of the greatest blessings you derive from the relationship?

What are some things you're thankful for?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2009-11-20T16:14:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

My author friend Jody Hedlund learned that the title of her debut novel with Bethany House is official. Great news, Jody! I'm looking forward to reading The Preacher's Daughter.
Several of my writer friends/blog followers completed first drafts recently, including Eileen Astels Watson, Jennifer Shirk, Sue Mason and Wendy. Congrats to each of you! There's nothing quite like reaching The End to fill a writer with a great sense of accomplishment. Enjoy the thrill.
My awesome critique partner Anne Barton also completed a first draft. I've read a portion of it and can't wait to enjoy the rest of her great story.
My writer friend Carla Gade completed her new writing studio. She created an inspirational atmosphere she loves. I hope you're enjoying that new space, Carla.

Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

My writer friend Donna Kohlstrom, who battles chronic illness, is dealing with a flare-up. My heart goes out to you, Donna. How difficult that must be. I hope you experience some relief soon.

Weekly Writing Recap: The Home Stretch

2009-11-15T23:31:00.000-08:00

I'm not much of a ball player. In fact, I was the last one picked when softball teams were chosen in my P.E. classes. Who want's a player who rarely brings the bat in contact with the ball?

On the rare occasion when I did get a viable hit, I could run. I'm a sprinter, so I sped around the diamond. Heading for home isn't something I got to do very often, which made the experience all the more thrilling when it did occur.

Tonight, I'm running for home. I'm less than an hour from finishing the rewrite of Violets & Violins. I plan to complete the final chapter before I put my head on the pillow

The race to the end is exciting, to be sure, but I know I have more to do. The final quarter of the book needs polishing, since I didn't take time to do so as I went along. I will also have the feedback from my CPs to incorporate. But the major work is behind me, and it feels great.

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Have you finished a major project recently? How did you feel?

Friendly Fridays: Celebrations & Commiserations

2009-11-13T01:03:00.000-08:00

Friendly Fridays are my new posts dedicated to you, my friends and followers.

I want to know what's going on in your lives.
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Celebrations

What celebrations can I join in this week? If you've received good news, achieved a goal or made progress, I'd love to hear about it.

My writer pal Katie Ganshert received a very important phone call this past week. Top-notch literary agent Rachelle Gardner offered Katie representation, which she wisely accepted. Way to go, Katie! You can read her emotionally charged blog post here.
My author friend Laura Frantz, who wrote The Frontiersman's Daughter, returned home after a successful trip to promote her book at the Kentucky Book Fair. Glad things went so well for you, Laura.

Commiserations

Did you experience doubts or discouragement, heartaches or hurts, sadness or setbacks this week? If so, I want to come alongside you with sympathy and cyber hugs.

Although I heard this sad news a couple of weeks ago, I want to offer my condolences to my frequent blog visitor Edna, who lost her beloved brother last month. Hugs to you, Edna. May the love of family and friends uphold you when you feel down.

Weekly Writing Recap: Endings

2009-11-08T22:08:00.000-08:00

Physically, I'm healing. After four weeks battling what turned out to be the Swine Flu, the end is in sight. I'm finally beginning to feel better. Although I'm still not 100%, I have my doctor's approval to rejoin society. After a month of being house-bound, I'm ready to get out again.

With the return of my energy, I was able to make significant progress on Violets & Violins. I now have three-quarters of the story polished and am sending those chapters to my critique partner a couple at a time. I have some work to do on the final quarter of the book, but thanks to a great suggestion from of one of my contest judges, I know what to do to fix a weak plot point, one that had bothered me. I'm eager to reach The End. I'll have to figure out a way to celebrate.

In contest news, I tweaked the first two chapters of Violets & Violins and sent them off for final round judging in the Finally A Bride contest. I did hear last Monday that the story is a finalist in the Launching a Star contest.

I also edited four excellent chapters and a synopsis for my critique partner this week.

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How do you celebrate when you reach the end of a major project?

What are some projects you've brought to fruition lately?

What are you doing to avoid the Swine Flu?

Weekly Writing Recap: Momentum

2009-11-01T09:59:00.000-08:00

Momentum.

My online dictionary offers two definitions. The first sounds like something my science teacher hubby could recite by heart: the quantity of motion of a moving body, measured as a product of its mass and velocity. The second sounds more applicable to creative endeavors such as writing: the impetus and driving force gained by the development of a process or course of events.

My momentum has been hampered by the bug I've been battling the past three weeks. The quantity of motion of my body has diminished greatly. Gwynly has convinced me it's time to seek medical attention for my lingering cough, sore chest muscles and fatigue. First thing Monday morning I will call my doctor's office for an appointment.

(Update: I did see the doctor. Diagnosis: Swine Flu. That explains why this bug has been such a pest. She said I should start feeling better in a week or so.)

On the creative front, however, Violets & Violins continues to gain momentum. A course of events has been unfolding unlike anything I could have imagined.

Let me take you back to the year 2007. I had completed five manuscripts in two years, all of them inspirational historicals. I began entering four of them in contests. Between July and November of that year, I prepared and submitted thirty-three entries. I kept one of the copiers at my local Office Max busy and my postal clerks scratching their heads as I explained exactly how each entry must be packaged and posted. I knew no other writers and had not discovered the world of writers in cyberspace, so I craved feedback from contest judges.

To my surprise and delight, I actually finaled in some of the contests. I ended up taking a first, two seconds, two thirds and an honorable mention. I also finaled in the Golden Heart with two of my four entries. (The two that didn't final came in the bottom half, so that humbling reality left me wondering what to think.) I'm no math whiz, but with the help of my trusty calculator I figured out I finaled about once for every four entries.

When I began entering Violets & Violins in contests, I chose carefully. I made sure there was an inspirational category (or sub-category as in The Emily.) I also looked to see who the final judges were, since I hoped to have my entry seen by some of them.

I ended up choosing ten contests to enter and promptly did so. With my history, I thought that way I might end up with two or even three finals. Of course, I'd have the preliminary judges' comments no matter what, which I value greatly.

Imagine my surprise when the first result came back. I was a finalist in The Maggies. Talk about incredulous. That was me. The successes that have followed have been nothing short of staggering. Violets & Violins has taken three firsts. It is pending placement in three more contests, having made the finalist list in The Southern Heat and Finally a Bride this weekend. I've pinched myself so often I'm going numb.

Violets & Violins has momentum. If asked why this story, a revision of one of those I entered in 2007, is doing so well, I have to say I'm not sure. I give much of the credit to my husband, who is my awesome plotting partner. His ideas for re-energizing the beginning of the story were awesome. My faithful critique partner, Anne Barton, has been with me every step of the way, listening to my struggles and successes and offering wonderful suggestions. My other critique partner, CJ Redwine, pointed out some weaknesses I'd been blind to as well.

For my part, I've spent the past two years studying craft and working to improve my writing. I've attended conferences and my local RWA chapter meetings, have visited more blogs for writers than I can count and have read many books in my genre. Plus, painful though it was, I rewrote three-quarters of the book, incorporating the great input of my partners.

As thrilled as I am at the success Violets & Violins is having on the contest circuit, I feel a bit guilty. I know there are many writers who would be encouraged by a contest final, and I've kept some of them from getting a spot. I never expected to garner so many myself, honestly. I like to share the joy of accomplishments. In fact, once the good news began pouring in, I ceased entering contests. I've four entries pending, but I won't be entering Violets & Violins again. I consider this story officially retired from the unpublished contest circuit.

In spite of my lack of physical momentum, I have managed to polish the first twenty chapters of Violets & Violins and am getting wonderful feedback on them from my CPs. I have yet to rework the ending to eliminate a weak plot point several judges pointed out but will do so soon. I'd like to be moving faster, but a body has limits. Once I get mine restored to health, though, watch out.

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How do you maintain momentum when you're not at your peak?

Have you ever experienced success that overwhelmed you?

What have been your biggest victories this week?

What challenges are you facing?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-10-25T12:38:00.000-07:00

After two weeks battling a pesky bug, I'm resurfacing. I've missed you, my blogging buddies, and look forward to catching up on your news.

The hardest part about being sick was that I was unable to attend the Homecoming Festivities at our daughter's university last weekend. I'd looked forward to seeing her and was heartsick when Gwynly headed off for the college without me. Even though my decision to stay home was a good one, I had a hard time making it. Thank goodness for cell phones and text messaging, which allow me to keep in touch with The Fashion Queen. Provided I continue to improve as I have been, I'll get to see her one day this week for a mom-daughter outing.

Despite spending much of my time sprawled on the couch and feeling cloudy-headed from cold meds recently, I managed to work on Violets & Violins in small snatches. I have the first 200 pages polished and ready for my critique partners.

Last week, I received this gorgeous plaque from The Heart of the Rockies contest coordinators, which brightened my day. What a lovely addition it made to the wall above my writing desk.

Yesterday, I received a call from the inspirational category coordinator from The Lone Star Contest, who shared the good news that Violets & Violins took first place.

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Since I was laid low these past two weeks and have been unable to make my visits to the blogs and Yahoo! groups I frequent, I'd love to hear how you're doing so I can celebrate your good news and commiserate on your challenges. And to anyone suffering with sickness, you have my sympathy.

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-10-11T22:46:00.000-07:00

Revision of Violets & Violins
Status: Nearing Completion

I made great progress on the revision this week, motivated by recent interest in the manuscript. The final edit of the first three chapters is complete, and I've sent them to my two awesome critique partners. The next three chapters will be ready to follow very soon.

I read five chapters for one of my critique partners, CJ Redwine. As always, I'm impressed with her amazing voice and unique story lines.

Saturday evening I received a call from the Heart of the Rockies contest coordinator. Violets & Violins took first place in the inspirational category.

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What was the best thing that happened to you this past week?

Review of a Great Read: Sarah, My Beloved

2009-10-10T16:17:00.000-07:00

Mail-Order Bride Story with a Twist

When I see the words “mail-order bride” on the back cover of a book, I get excited. These are my favorite reads, followed closely by marriage of convenience stories. I was in for a treat when I discovered Sarah, My Beloved by Sharlene MacLaren, because this story involves the former turning into the latter. A well-written tale with captivating characters I loved from the start, Sarah, My Beloved exceeded my expectations. The ever-increasing emotion and conflict kept me turning pages eager to find out how two strangers could overcome the obstacles MacLaren throws in their path. It’s easy to see why this book has garnered so many great reviews. Like others, I highly recommend the story, confident those who love a historical with heart will enjoy this book from an author who’s delivered a moving inspirational romance.

MacLaren’s rich, spirited heroine, Sarah Woodward, follows the Lord’s leading to leave her life of luxury in Massachusetts and head to Little Hickman Creek in Kentucky. Upon arriving, Sarah discovers her intended has fallen for someone else and was unable to get a message to her in time. When a lifelong friend from home arrives in town pushing a marriage she wants no part of, small-town farmer Rocky Callahan proposes. He needs a mother for the niece and nephew left in his care when his sister died, but what he doesn’t need is a romantic entanglement. Can Sarah win the heart of her reluctant husband, and can Rocky deal with the loss of his first wife and young son and find his way back to the Lord?

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What Do You Think?

Do you enjoy mail-order bride and marriage of convenience stories? If so, what is it you like about them?

Do you prefer action-packed, suspenseful stories, or are you partial to those based upon the characters and their growth as the story progresses?

Do you like to read rich lady of luxury meets working-class man stories?

Attention, Romance Readers

If you enjoy reading inspirational romances as I do, I invite you to let me know. I will be, at random, gifting gently read copies of books I review, motivational bookmarks or other items of my choosing. You can let me know of our mutual interest in the inspirational romance genre or a particular book via a comment in which you include an email address or by sending a message using my email address, which is listed in the sidebar under “Contact Information.”

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Jarmara Falconer, winner of Dreaming of Home by Glynna Kaye.

(Note: Because I’ve decided to to forgo holding regularly scheduled drawings, this will be my last announcement of a winner.)

Special Note

I purchased my copy of Sarah, My Beloved and am offering this review of my own accord and without remuneration of any kind.

Five on Friday: A Sound Idea

2009-10-09T22:33:00.000-07:00

My Maggie Medallion arrived in the mail yesterday, and I've worn this beautiful piece of jewelry ever since. A former Maggie winner said of this impressive silver oval, "I like the way it feels kind of heavy." She said the weight of the handmade disc serves as a reminder of a special event.

I hung my Medallion on a rope-style necklace because it's so heavy. I wouldn't want to lose my prize, so I didn't trust a delicate link-style chain. As my writer friend noted, I can feel it resting on my chest.

After I clasped the beautiful bit of bling around my neck and went about my day, I heard a faint ringing noise when I moved. It took me a little while to figure out the source: the Medallion sliding along the chain. Each time I hear the soft sound, I'm reminded of the huge blessing bestowed on me last Saturday night and enjoy the thrill all over again.

Sounds, like smells and tastes, can trigger emotional responses. Some sounds, like a babbling brook or the ring of a bell for a touchdown, make us feel good. Others, like the wail of a siren or a child's fearful cry, can elicit the opposite response. Those of us who are writers work to add sounds to our stories, knowing they can being about reactions in our characters as well as enhance our readers' experience.

Here are five sounds that are special to me.

1) The tone telling me I received a text message from our daughter, who is away at college. I hunger for her updates and race for my cell phone when I hear that sound.

2) The hum of our pellet stove in winter. I run cold, and when I wake to that familiar sound I know heat is close at hand.

3) The sound of our cats purring as they come into my office to visit me when I'm writing. The house is mighty quiet in these Empty Nest days, and the visits from my feline friends help ease my loneliness.

4) The rich throaty roar of my husband's classic 1968 MGB roadster when it pulls into the garage after his day of work. I look forward to seeing my guy again and hearing how his day went.

5) The rush of hot water into the tub at day's end. I know relaxation, warmth and a good read are soon to come as I partake of my nightly ritual: soaking in my Calgon-scented bath as I enjoy a few chapters of a great story.

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What are some sounds you like to hear, and why?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-10-04T01:48:00.000-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 101,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: ??

I honestly don't know how many words I added or rewrote this week. I received feedback from a contest and went to work incorporating some of the excellent suggestions from my judges into the first chapters in preparation for another contest entry. I think the tweaking helped and felt good about sending the file to the coordinator, which I did with very few minutes to spare.

Good news rained upon me this week. I'm talking a deluge of delight. On Thursday I learned that Violets & Violins finaled in The Golden Pen.

Last night a kind and generous writer friend at the Georgia Romance Writers' Moonlight & Magnolias conference, Walt Mussell, called me on his cell phone and put it on speaker so I could hear the results of The Unpublished Maggies as they were announced. They started with the honorable mentions and made their way through the placements in reverse order. To my surprise, my name was the last one called in the inspirational category. My story took first place in The Maggies!

Walt held the phone up to the mic, and I got to convey my thanks. My Toastmaster pals would have been disappointed in me, I'm afraid. I don't think what I said made a whole lot of sense because I was in a state of shock. Getting words out was a challenge since my throat was thick and I was attempting to hold back the tears of joy ready to pour forth. I hope I thanked everyone I intended to, but I'm not sure.

I've been writing nearly four years, so this flood of good news feels mighty good. I'm still in "Is this really happening to me?" mode. I fear I'll wake up tomorrow and find myself several shades of purple and blue from pinching myself. :)

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When have you been so blessed words failed you?

Review of Great Read: Dreaming of Home

2009-10-03T10:50:00.000-07:00

Heartwarming Tale of Coming Home

Glynna Kaye’s debut novel, Dreaming of Home, is delightful. From first page to last, I enjoyed every minute I spent reading this tale of love triumphing over trials. Kaye’s endearing characters captured me from the start, and I rushed through the book, eager to see them overcome the challenges keeping them apart and find the future the Lord has in store for them. If you like a sweet, gentle romance with heart, this story is for you.

Widower Joe Diaz returns to his hometown determined to be a great dad to his little boy, whom he’d rarely seen during his Navy days. Still grieving and anxious to provide for his son, he has no time for a relationship with his pretty and pleasant new neighbor. Meg McGuire has come to the same small Arizona mountain community to rebuild her life after disease and a broken relationship shattered her world, only to discover that the handsome father of her Sunday school student is vying for the same teaching position she is. Can she keep herself from falling for the one man who can destroy her dreams?

Special Note

I was privileged to judge Glynna’s story in the 2008 Golden Pen contest. As I read, I knew I’d discovered a gem. My comments to her read, “I fully expect to see your book on the shelves in the near future. You’ve got a winner.”

When the entry finaled, I was happy. When I learned that final judge Melissa Endlich from Steeple Hill had requested the manuscript and bought it, I was elated. This is the first time I’ve seen an entry I judged go on to sell, and it’s both exciting and rewarding. When I received the autographed copy of Dreaming of Home that Glynna sent as a surprise, I moved it to the top of my TBR mountain and savored her story without delay.

If you’d like to hear more about Glynna’s journey to publication, you can read her interview at my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey. I’ll be publishing the post October 8th.

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What Do You Think?

Do you enjoy contemporary romances set in small towns?

Do you like having young children in the stories you read?

Have you ever judged a contest entry you felt was ready for publication?

Have you ever had the thrill of seeing a contest entry you judged in print?

Your Chance to Win a Book

If you enjoy reading inspirational romances, leave a comment for your chance to win a brand new copy of the title I just reviewed. Be sure to include your email address when prompted, so I can contact you. (I don't share this information.)

I'll choose a winner from all those who leave a comment by the Friday after the post and will post the winners' names this coming Saturday.

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Virginia C, winner of Montana Rose by Mary Connealy.

Five on Friday: Winds of Change

2009-10-02T10:44:00.000-07:00

Change.

The word itself can evoke many feelings.

My family of three has undergone a significant change recently. Gwynly and I are experiencing our first exposure to the Empty Nest while the Fashion Queen is adjusting to life as a first-year college student. She's been gone nearly two weeks, and some of the initial excitement is wearing off, leaving me a bit lonely.

When clouds loom on my horizon and showers feel near at hand, I reflect on how well our small town gal is doing at her home away from home. She's got a lovely room, complete with posters from some of her favorite movies and musicals.

The FQ's college has the largest number of bikes per capita of any US city. She learned to ride in order to be able to get around on the large campus, and has made great strides in her cycling skills. She's ventured into town on the bus, sung a solo at her dorm's get-acquainted karaoke event, made great new friends and gone to see a prof about a needed course change.

Growth is taking place at every turn, and I couldn't be prouder.

As I've witnessed the Fashion Queen's progress, I've thought about my characters. Like my daughter, they're experiencing significant change. Their stories begin at a time when life as they knew it has shifted dramatically.

I noticed five similarities between my daughter's move to college and the situations that precipitate change for my characters.

1) Leaving one place and moving to another

2) Leaving former friends and making new ones

3) Being separated from one's family or support system

4) Being forced to learn a new skill in order to survive and thrive

5) Being forced to find solutions to problems never before encountered

As I think of my current story, I see that my heroine was dealing with four of the five at the beginning of the story, along with other changes. No wonder the poor woman felt a bit off kilter.

Forcing my characters to deal with change is what makes their stories interesting. Who wants to read about the boring everyday stuff like laundry, dishes and scrubbing the sink? Yawn! I like stories that show me how a person handles the challenges that come his/her way.

I'm off to put my characters through some more tough times and see how they fare. : )

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What are some times in life when you've been forced to deal with a major change?

Can you recall a story you've read recently that began with a character facing a major life-changing event? What was it?

What are some items you would add to my "Situations That Precipitate Change" list?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-09-27T22:19:00.000-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 101,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: 0

Life changed dramatically the past two weeks. Gwynly and I moved the Fashion Queen to college.

Our first-year student is doing quite well, and we're immensely proud of her. Meanwhile, we're adjusting to our Empty Nest. The house is quieter. There is far less laundry. The coffee table, where our daughter preferred to do her homework, isn't piled with textbooks, empty Dr. Pepper cans and an assortment of jewelry.

We writers hear the oft-repeated advice to begin a story at a character's moment of profound change. I can see why. At those times, emotion runs rampant. I felt drained during the days following our separation. I wept my way through the supermarket where items on every aisle reminded me of my gal. When she faced a challenge with a course change and overcame it, I rejoiced. Upon receiving an email with photos of her sporting her first henna tattoo, I laughed.

Life as I knew it will never be the same. I'll never be the same. The experience of launching my daughter into adulthood has ended the hands-on mom period of my life. The Fashion Queen is fast becoming an independent young woman I'm happy to call my friend. While she'll always be my little girl at heart, she no longer needs me in the same ways she once did. She's growing and changing, and so am I.

Now that the move is behind us, I'm eager to return to my writing. Before I could, I had some contest entries to judge. I was blessed with two stellar stories to score. Both of these writers have amazing voices. I'll be a better writer for having had the privilege of reading their work.

Moving forward with Violets & Violins is my goal now. I'm eager to finish the revision so I can preform an edit and move on to my next story. I feel a renewed sense of enthusiasm as I anticipate spending time with my characters.

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For those of you with an Empty Nest, I'd love to hear how you weathered the emotional upheaval.

For those of you who aren't parents or who haven't launched your children into the world yet, what major transitions have you experienced, and how have you dealt with them?

For those of you who are writers, have you used a major change from your life in one of your stories?

Review of a Great Read: Montana Rose

2009-09-26T23:05:00.000-07:00

Long before I began writing, I was a voracious reader of romances. I still love a great story, and there are many wonderful authors writing them. I invite you to check back on Saturdays when I share my reviews of some books I've enjoyed recently, both historical and contemporary.

The Review

Montana Rose Moved Me

If the name Mary Connealy is on the cover of a book, I know I’m in for a good read. Having cracked up as I hightailed it through Petticoat Ranch and Calico Canyon, I was fully prepared to chuckle my way though Montana Rose as well. To my surprise, I found this historical to be delightfully different. While some scenes launched me into laughter, Montana Rose offers more than mere entertainment. Connealy has crafted a story with an important message, but she conveys it with such skill and finesse that I was swept into this heartwarming tale and enjoyed every moment with her engaging characters.

Cassie Griffin loses her husband one day, and at his burial the next, the many bachelors in her tiny Montana territory town vie for the opportunity to wed the silk-clad, seemingly spoiled woman they refer to as the China Doll. When the ruthless rancher with the largest spread claims the right to marry her, god-fearing Red Dawson feels led to protect her and proposes, despite the fact that she’s not a believer. Pregnant and penniless, Cassie chooses the lesser of two evils and accepts. While Red attempts to live his life as a testimony of his faith, Cassie seeks to mold herself into the wife she thinks he wants, just as she did with her controlling, abusive first husband. Scenes when Cassie attempts to learn new skills showcase Connealy’s trademark humor, but others moved me at a deep level as Red exhibits the patience of Job while dealing with his attraction to his beautiful, bungling bride.

Of the Connealy books I’ve read so far, Montana Rose stands out as my favorite. I love Red’s godly character, his devotion to Cassie, and witnessing her journey to wholeness and healing as she learns to accept the love of the Lord and her new husband. I heartily recommend this book.

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What Do You Think?

Do you enjoy stories in which the heroine learns a valuable life lesson?

Do you enjoy stories that blend humor with an important message?

Your Chance to Win a Book

If you enjoy reading inspirational romances, leave a comment for your chance to win my gently read copy of the title I just reviewed. Be sure to include your email address when prompted, so I can contact you. (I don't share this information.)

I'll choose a winner from all those who leave a comment by the Friday after the post and will post the winners' names this coming Saturday.

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Terri Tiffany, winner of No Place for a Lady by Maggie Brendan.

Review of a Great Read: No Place for a Lady

2009-09-19T13:56:00.000-07:00

The Review

A Lady and a Cowboy Clash

Maggie Brendan’s debut novel, No Place for a Lady, combines many elements that make for a great historical read: a pampered Southern belle, an ambitious cowboy on her aunt’s cattle ranch, love interests who come between them, tragedy, conflicts and surprises. Set against the breathtaking backdrop of the Colorado Rockies, the story begins when Crystal Clark arrives at her Aunt Kate’s spread following the death of her father. Thrust into the rigors of life in the West, Crystal struggles to discover God’s plan for her future. Does she embrace this new adventure and admit her attraction to her aunt’s rugged, hardworking ranch foreman, Luke Weber, or return to Georgia where she knows what to expect and what’s expected of her?

Luke wants a ranch of his own, and marrying the local cattle baron’s daughter will give him that. But first, he has to get the cattle to market with the so-called help of Crystal, Kate’s seemingly fragile and yet feisty niece who’s captured his attention. Torn between following his dream and heeding the call of his heart, he struggles to find answers. Only when he looks to the Lord for them is peace possible.

Discovering a new writer whose work I enjoy is a treat. Brendan has earned a place on my Sure-to-please Authors’ list. I like her characters, her heartwarming tale and her storytelling ability. I’m looking forward to the second book in her Heart of the West series when readers will discover what the future holds for a secondary character who was dealt a blow in No Place for a Lady.

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What Do You Think?

Are you a fan of cowboy stories? If so, what is it about these rugged men that makes them such appealing characters?

Do you enjoy stories in which the hero and heroine are kept apart because one or both are committed to another character?

Do you enjoy stories that take place in the Wild West? If so, which states are your favorites settings?

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Kristen Torres-Toro, winner of Protector's Honor by Kit Wilkinson.

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-09-13T21:45:00.000-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 101,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: 3,000

I'm coming up on the end of the rewrite. I still have a few chapters from the previous version to revise and add to this one, but then I'll be ready to move to editing and cutting.

I received feedback from one of the contests I entered. As usual, I found the comments helpful. Two judges pointed out a weak point in my synopsis, and one shared an idea that will make the story much stronger. Wow! I'm eager to incorporate the suggestion that judge gave, which will overcome the problem. Contests help me in many ways, and I'm grateful for generous judges willing to share their expertise as well as their time.

One week from today, Gwynly and I will move our one and only into her dorm. The Fashion Queen and I have much to do in preparation for her move, so she's my priority this week. All too soon I'll have more time to myself than I'm used to. For now, helping my daughter begin a new chapter of her life takes priority. This milestone only comes once.

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Have you gone through any major transitions in life? How did you deal with them?

Have you received helpful contest feedback? How did you incorporate it in your story?

Review of a Great Read: Protector's Honor

2009-09-12T21:33:00.000-07:00

The Review

Award-winning Suspense Scores

Each year the Romance Writers of America® holds a contest called the Golden Heart® to discover the best romance manuscripts available in the U.S. and abroad. In 2008, Kit Wilkinson’s story took the top award in the inspirational category and sold two months later. I waited a year for the release of Protector’s Honor, knowing the book would be a winner, and my wait was rewarded with an action-packed read that kept me turning the pages until two in the morning.

When Tabitha Beaumont screams, NCIS agent Rory Farrell comes to her rescue, averting an abduction attempt. The handsome hero with a big heart that’s gone out to Tabitha learns shortly thereafter about a connection between her and his latest murder investigation. Soon it becomes clear her life is in danger due to vital information she doesn’t even know she possesses, and Rory steps in to protect her. Evidence points to possible involvement of someone dear to Tabitha, and in a moment of weakness, she gives in to her growing feelings for Rory and divulges a secret. In order to ensure her safety, he’s forced to choose between betraying her trust and following his heart.

Wilkinson’s story takes off at a fast clip and hurtles from one scene to the next. Each time I thought things might settle down, another twist or turn transpired, keeping me off balance and racing for the end to find out how these two likable people deal with impending disaster. If you enjoy a riveting romance with a heaping helping of suspense and strong characters who entrust their uncertain futures to the Lord, I recommend Protector’s Honor.

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What Do You Think?

Do you enjoy romantic suspense? If so, what is it about these riveting reads that captivates you?

What qualities do you like to see in the main characters of a romantic suspense?

When was the last time a book kept you up until the wee hours?

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Marissa, winner of an elegant apple green metal bookmark that reads: faith ~ now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see. ~ Hebrews 11:1.

Five on Friday: Getting Wordy

2009-09-11T10:38:00.000-07:00

Words. I love 'em.

I really like to write so very much that at times I just exceed my word count and end up with a story headed for the chopping block.

My current rewrite of Violets & Violins is nearing completion, but I've been too wordy. I'll wield the scalpel soon. Naw. Better make that the meat cleaver.

I'll seek unnecessary scenes or even entire chapters that don't move the story forward and slice them. Will the process hurt? Some, yes. After all, those words flowed from my fingertips.

However, one thing I've learned about myself over the three and a half years I've been writing fiction is that I can produce more and even better work the second, third or seventeenth time I revise a portion of a story. Knowing that has eased the pain of pruning my prose.

In addition to removing large portions of text, I'll seek words that add nothing to my story. Although small, they add to my word count. Out they go.

And what are some of my most overused words? Here are five:

1) so

2) just

3) very

4) really

5) headed

I can generally eliminate the first four without altering the sentence. The last word may not be on your list, but my characters head everywhere. Why, I don't know. It just happens. I replace many of the occurrences with more descriptive words.

In my opening, I used all five words on my list in one l-o-n-g sentence. Here's how it reads post pruning: I like to write but at times exceed my word count and end up with a story destined for the chopping block.

Words and motivational sayings cover my office walls. One phrase I could use but haven't yet found is "Write Tight."

Perhaps after culling words I carefully crafted, I'll learn that less is often more. I'd really like that so very much. Er. That is to say, I'd like that.

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My fellow writers, do you tend exceed your word count or come up short? Why do you think that is?

What unnecessary words worm their way into your work?

Readers, have you ever read a book in which certain scenes seemed to slow the story and could have easily been cut? Do you notice when a writer has gotten wordy?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-09-06T22:34:00.000-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 98,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: 8,000

Even though the status bar indicates I'm nearly finished with the rewrite, I still have several chapters to go. As I've mentioned before, the book is going to be long and require some cutting. I'm prepared to wield the scalpel and even to pull out the meat cleaver if necessary, knowing that tightening the story will only serve to improve it.

I received a call from the coordinator of The Heart of the Rockies contest this week. Violets & Violins finaled in the inspirational category. I'm pleased to see this story doing so well and earning me the right to have it seen by the top-notch agents and editors who have so generously offered to serve as the final judges.

Because I appreciate the opportunity to get feedback on my story and the chance to have it seen by industry professionals should it final, I prepared and sent three more contest submissions this week.

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How was your writing week? Do you have good news to share?

Review of a Great Read: The Frontiersman's Daughter

2009-09-05T15:41:00.000-07:00

       Long before I began writing, I was a voracious reader of romances. I still love a great story, and there are many wonderful authors writing them. I invite you to check back on Saturdays when I share my reviews of some books I've enjoyed recently, both historical and contemporary.

The Review

The Frontiersman’s Daughter

by Laura Frantz

An Epic Tale of Life and Love in Early Kentucke

Debut author Laura Franz writes like a seasoned professional. The Frontiersman’s Daughter melds powerful characters, artistic description and a captivating storyline into a feast sure to satisfy readers who crave stories with heart. Told through the eyes of the strong, determined, courageous daughter of one of the first white men to settle in Kentucke, the story follows Lael Click’s journey from a girl of thirteen to a woman of twenty as she deals with loss, love and the need of the Lord in her life.

The tale takes place during the time of the American Revolution when tensions between the settlers and Indians were high. Lael’s past is stained by the sins of her pioneer parents, and she must overcome bitterness and vengeful longings as she seeks to find her own place in the world. Her biggest choice concerns matters of the heart. Three men have laid claim to her affections: her childhood sweetheart, a mysterious white man captured and raised by the Shawnee, and a Scottish doctor whose firm faith forces her to face her past and choose the course for her future. Through her friendships with Simon, Captain Jack and Doctor Ian Justus, Lael learns of life, love and the saving grace of the Lord. But which man will ultimately capture her heart?

As I began The Frontiersman’s Daughter, it became clear this story wasn’t exactly what I expected. It’s so much more. While there is a satisfying romance with a hero I fell hard for, the epic tale is deeper and richer than many stories I’ve read. The reader is taken on a journey as Lael lives life in a period rarely featured in a romance. Because of Frantz’s meticulous research, I learned a great deal about what life was like for those brave souls who ventured into the frontier. With words as her medium, she paints pictures so vivid I felt I was right there with Lael. If you like emotional depth to your stories, you’ll be rewarded as you laugh, cry and sigh with the rich cast of characters. And the romance is as sweet as the bee gum honey Lael loves. I highly recommend this book and look forward to Frantz’s next release, Courting Morrow Little.

What Do You Think?

Do you enjoy stories set in Colonial America?

Do you like romances where you don’t know who the lead female character will choose until the very end?

Are you drawn to bad boys, adventurers or gentlemanly male leads, (all three types you’ll encounter in Laura’s great story, btw)?

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Your Chance to Win a Prize

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Normally, I give away my gently read copy of the book I reviewed, but not this week. The Frontiersman’s Daughter is going on my keeper’s shelf. I want to study this book and explore the artistry, characterization and great chapter endings as I discover some of Laura’s secrets for creating a captivating story.

In lieu of a book this week, I’m giving away an elegant metal bookmark that reads: faith ~ now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see. ~ Hebrews 11:1”.

Be sure to include your email address when prompted, so I can contact you. (I don't share this information.)

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I'll choose a winner from all those who leave a comment by the Friday after the post and will post the winners' names this coming Saturday.

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Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Carla Gade, winner of my gently read copy of Love Finds You in Bethlehem, New Hampshire by Lauralee Bliss.

Five on Friday: Writer Movies

2009-09-04T08:54:00.001-07:00

Tears welled when I watched a scene in the recent release Julie and Julia when Julie returns home to find not one, but many calls on her answering machine, calls every wanna-be-published writer would love to hear. My daughter shifted in her seat, putting distance between us, when I pulled out a tissue and did mop-up.

The Fashion Queen loves to sing but doesn't like to write. She didn't get this poignant moment the way I did. I'm sure there were few in the theater who did. Most focus on the fine French fare or Meryl Streep's spot-on portrayal of Julia Child.

To me, the movie is about two writers, and I related to their highs and lows. I laughed, cried and sighed with Julia as she spent eight years of her life endeavoring to get her famous cookbook published and with Julie as she blogged about her experience cooking Julia's dishes decades later.

Another aspect of the movie that touched me deeply was the supportive husbands who stood behind these two women. My Gwynly is such a man, and I'm grateful beyond words.

If you want to see a movies that is sure to please, I recommend Julie and Julia. Even if you're not a writer, it's still a great show.

Five Writer Movies that Have Moved Me

1) Julie and Julia

2) Miss Potter - about Beatrix Potter, creator of Peter Rabbit and his pals

3) Little Women - about Josephine March, a character modeled on the book's Victorian author Louisa May Alcott

4) Finding Neverland - about J.M. Berrie, creator of Peter Pan

5) Becoming Jane - about Jane Austen

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I'd love to hear about other writer movies. Which have you enjoyed and what was it you liked about them?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-08-30T20:36:00.001-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 90,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: 14,000

Yes. I added 14,000 words to the rewrite.

No. Those are not original words.

I experienced a pleasant surprise this week, as well as a not-so-pleasant one.

I reached a point in the earlier revision of Violets & Violins where little needed to be changed before I added it to the current rewrite. Not only that, but I also had the discovery that the final quarter of the previous version was better than the first three-quarters. To my delight, I seemed to have matured as a writer during the previous rewrite. There's far less telling in the final chapters, more action and plenty of conflict.

On the downside, I realized the story is going to end up longer than the 100,000 words I predicted. I'm not surprised, since I tend to write a loose first draft. What this means, though, is that I'll have to cut and tighten. While not what I planned, I've learned from experience that doing so makes my stories stronger.

For now, I'm focused on adding the final chapters and getting to The End. I want a complete version before I put Violets & Violins on a diet. The day is fast approaching when I'll reach that point, and I'm excited.

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Do you write flowing first drafts that need to be trimmed, or are your early attempts skeletons in need of fleshing out?
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Have you ever read a manuscript you wrote over a long period of time and noticed your writing had improved as you went along?
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When reading stories, do you like those that are concise with focus on action or those that paint a period and setting using the bold brush strokes of description?

Review of a Good Read: Love Finds You in Bethlehem, New Hampshire

2009-08-29T11:44:00.000-07:00

The Review

Love Finds You in Bethlehem, New Hampshire

by Lauralee Bliss

My absolute favorite read is a mail-order bride story, so when I discovered Love Finds You in Bethlehem, New Hampshire, I was eager to get a copy. I read the back cover blurb and was even more intrigued. The artist who placed the advertisement, Thomas Haskins, takes one look at Sara McGee and realizes he can’t marry the penniless, uneducated and unkempt woman who steps off the train in his posh resort town. Being a man of honor, he befriends Sara, who, under his chaperone sister's tutelage, learns how to be a lady. However, Tom’s caught the eye of a cultured and determined socialite who wants him as her husband and entices him with a promised trip to study art in Italy, an offer that sorely tempts him.

Lauralee Bliss has created two characters I liked, although at times I was none too pleased with Thomas’s choices. A kindhearted man who’s decided it would serve his career to marry--and ease his lonely heart--his initial prejudice and aloofness toward Sara troubled me. However, I loved watching the change the Lord worked in his heart. Sara is a sympathetic character. I felt for this young woman who’d lost everything and everyone, forcing her to live on the streets of New York City. She shows inner strength and a strong faith, which come to her aid as she deals with those who’ve misjudged her. Can two people from such different worlds ever find happiness?

Bliss turned the tables on the traditional mail-order bride story, and I like what she did. There’s plenty of emotion and tension between Thomas and Sara. I enjoyed getting a look at the affluent Gilded Age through the eyes of characters from such diverse backgrounds. Bliss brought the setting to life. And I liked the fact that Thomas is an artist, a profession I’ve rarely encountered in a romance but works so well in this one. If you’re looking for a sweet, traditional romance or a mail-order bride story with a twist, I’m sure you’ll enjoy Love Finds You in Bethlehem, New Hampshire.

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Question for You

Do you enjoy mail-order bride stories? Why or why not?

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Your Chance to Win a Book

If you enjoy reading inspirational romances, leave a comment for your chance to win my gently-read copy of the title I just reviewed. Be sure to include your email address when prompted, so I can contact you. (I don't share this information.)

I'll choose a winner from all those who leave a comment by the Friday after the post and will post the winners' names this coming Saturday.

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Cindy and Edna, winners of my two copies of Ransome's Honor by Kaye Dacus.

Five on Friday: Fear ~ Friend or Foe?

2009-08-28T09:53:00.000-07:00

I'm almost afraid to tell you this, but I'm a writer who falls prey to fear.

Ever happen to you?

In spite of the fact that my stories have finaled and placed in contests and that I've received positive feedback from contest judges and critique partners, the Voice haunts me. You know the one. The Voice that whispers in your ear, filling your head with uncertainty and causing you to wonder what in the world you're doing calling yourself a writer.

Five Things the Voice Wants Me to Believe

1) My main characters aren't likable or heroic enough.

2) My dialogue is weak and my character's voices indistinct.

3) The conflict isn't clearly stated or strong enough.

4) The plot isn't fresh or big enough to carry the story.

5) The beginning isn't catchy enough or chapter endings captivating enough.

I wrote for two years in isolation. I used the Internet for research, but I'd yet to discover the wonders of cyberspace or the bounty awaiting me in the blogosphere. During that time, I faced fears on a daily basis.

When I finaled in the Golden Heart in March 2008, a whole new world greeted me. I met other writers as well as published authors. Certain they had it all together, I kept my fears to myself.

As time went on, though, some writers and authors alluded to their fears in blog posts and on chat loops. I realized I wasn't alone.

Just this week, I was privileged to have lunch with two new author friends. I brought up the subject of fear. As I suspected, they aren't immune. One, a debut author with her first book recently released, fears being a victim of Second Book Syndrome, asking herself if she'll be able to produce another story her editor will buy. The other, a multi-published author with over seventy books to her credit, fears her stories will start sounding alike.

No. I'm not alone. But what do I do with the fears I face? Are they friend or foe?

When my fears serve me, prompting me to examine my story and make it stronger, they're my friend. However, when I allow them to take hold, squelch my creativity and stall my writing, they're a foe.

I know the Voice is there, but I can choose when I use what it's saying to inspire me to and when I silence it by reminding myself of truth.

Writing takes a great deal of courage. We continually put our creations out there to be critiqued, criticized and rejected. However, we must believe in ourselves and continue to produce the best stories we're capable of, given our training and talents. Courage, perseverance and passion are our allies.

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Is fear a factor in your life?
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What types of things does the Voice like to whisper in your ear?
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How do you face your fears and silence the Voice when it shifts from friend to foe?

Weekly Writing Recap

2009-08-23T21:53:00.000-07:00

Major Revision/Rewrite of Violets & Violins
Status: 76,000 words out of 100,000

Words added/rewritten this week: 4,000

The biggest news this week is that Violets & Violins finaled in its second contest.

Thursday morning I received a call from the inspirational category coordinator for Northwest Houston RWA's Lone Star contest. Elizabeth Pina was a guest at my other blog, Romance Writers on the Journey. Hearing the good news from a writer friend made my excitement even greater.

I shared the news on Facebook and Twitter and was overwhelmed by the number of comments I received. So many wonderful people joined in my happy dance that I was overwhelmed. My thanks go out to each one who celebrated with me.

Writing can be a challenging undertaking. We deal with doubt, discouragement and disappointment. When good news arrives, I experience a surge of confidence.

With two finals, I feel pressure to complete the rewrite as quickly as possible in the event that a final judge makes a request. I'm a person who works well with deadlines, so I'll be busy making my writing meter move.

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What good things have been happening for you?
Please share so I can squee with you.

Please don't limit yourself to first sales, agent signings or contest finals.
I want to hear about pages added, helpful critique partner feedback, a scene that came together and put a smile on your face . . .
The little victories are just as important as the big ones.

Review of a Great Read: Ransome's Honor

2009-08-22T23:33:00.000-07:00

The Review

Ransome's Honor by Kaye Dacus

Dacus Delivers a Riveting Regency

Wow! Ransome's Honor by Kaye Dacus is a winner. From first page to last, I was swept into the world of Regency England, brought to life through her vivid descriptions. I could visualize the bustling town of Portsmouth, smell the salty sea air and hear the lap of waves against the hulls of the Royal Navy's magnificent sailing ships.

Amidst the spectacular setting, we encounter a wonderful cast of characters. I liked both Captain William Ransome, the epitome of a distinguished naval officer, and Julia Witherington, a bright, determined, resourceful admiral's daughter. The secondary characters, from Julia's garrulous best friend to William's unrefined but well-intentioned steward-cum-valet, are engaging, although Dacus crafted a set of scheming scoundrels sure to raise your hackles, especially the blackguard Sir Drake Pembroke.

Rejected by Lieutenant Ransome, seventeen-year-old Julia vowed never to forgive him for not proposing to her, as all believed he would. When circumstances bring them together twelve years later, they must face one another--and their long-denied feelings. Now a captain complete with fame and fortune, William is pressed into service as Julia's protector. When deceitful relatives unveil a plan to rob her of her sizable dowry and force her to marry a cousin she reviles, she turns to the man her father loves as a son, the same man who shattered her heart. To keep her from harm, William agrees to the business arrangement she offers him--a one-year marriage in name only--in exchange for her legacy. But can they deny their reemerging feelings for one another?

Dacus is a talented author. I read her contemporaries, Stand-in Groom and Menu for Romance, and enjoyed both. I wondered, however, if her voice would lend itself to historical romance. Indeed, it does. Her research and attention to detail are remarkable, as are her command of the fashions, furnishings and dialogue of the period. She does a fine job incorporating the faith element into Ransome's Honor and has produced an inspirational Regency I enthusiastically recommend.

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Questions for You

Do you enjoy Regency romances? If so, what aspects are most important to you? Historical details? Period-appropriate dialogue?

If you've enjoyed an author's story in one genre, will you generally read her work in another?

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Your Chance to Win a Book

If you enjoy reading inspirational romances, leave a comment for your chance to win my gently-read copy of the title I just reviewed. Be sure to include your email address when prompted, so I can contact you. (I don't share this information.)

I'll choose two winners from all those who leave a comment by the Friday after the post and will post the winners' names this coming Saturday.

Last Week's Winner

Congrats to Diane and Mez, winners of my two copies of Menu for Romance by Kaye Dacus.